Spring Monoku

Hearing mother bird singing to her little birds chirping fills my heart with joy.
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Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 9:58 AM
Congratulations, Paula, on your win. I share the same sentiment with you - first thing in the morning, from my bed I listen to birds. Spring brings so much joy!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 10:29 AM
Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. When I hear the birds singing, then I know spring is here. I love springtime. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Kerr Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 11:08 AM
Impeccable Paula. Congratulations on your success with this insightful, beguiling piece on how a different species interacts with its offspring. Thank you so much for your kind reflections on my entry. Much valued and very much appreciated Howard
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 12:10 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I enjoyed writing this one. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 12:23 PM
"2 Place" Spring Monoku ~ Date Written:5/10/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet......
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 12:29 PM
Congrats!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 12:34 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 10:09 AM
Sweet, Paula ~
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be, Sweet. I enjoy hearing the birds sing as I go writing away. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
George Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 6:32 AM
It is so pleasant to hear the mother bird singing to her little birdies. Congratulations, dear Paula. Hugs!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 12:32 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love spring and hearing the birds sing. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 2:31 AM
- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Paula :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -:) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 12:30 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Also thanks for coming back to read again. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love hearing the birds sing. Each year, the birds tell us spring is in the air. Hugs... May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 9:48 PM
So sweet. Congrats in the contest
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be, So sweet. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Mckeithan Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 9:02 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest Paula
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 12:27 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love hearing the birds sing. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Buhagiar Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 2:19 AM
How beautiful this monoku is.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 12:26 PM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love hearing the birds sing. God's little singers and never off key. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Mckeithan Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 2:16 PM
Mine too. New life springs forth
Goldsmith Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 10:52 AM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. Birds singing and little birds chirping say spring is here. Hooray!!! May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Wolf Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 7:02 PM
Sweet chirping - a charming piece of Spring.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 11:06 AM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be, a charming piece of Spring. Many birds are now showing up. Hooray!!! I love hearing the birds sing as I go writing away. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Woods Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 12:32 PM
One of my favorite things during spring as well! Good write! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 1:47 PM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be a, Good write. I enjoy hearing the birds sing as I go writing away. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 12:06 PM
It really is so joyful
Goldsmith Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 1:45 PM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I loved bringing this one to life. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Greenhough Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 7:26 AM
I like your bird poem. I relate to these chirpers.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 9:15 AM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love hearing the birds sing. They will make my day a good day. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Godwin Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 12:51 PM
That's why God created such beautiful bird sounds and wonderous bird observations - to remind us to be joyful, all is not only in divine order, but also beautiful if we use our senses minus brain activity to 'feel'. I concur with your monoku! CayCay
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 9:13 AM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love hearing the birds sing. God's little singers and never off key. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Andresen Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 10:34 AM
- Wonderful to listen to, Paula :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 9:11 AM
Thank You for reading, writing and for your Good luck in the contest.. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love hearing the birds sing. Hugs... May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Babcock Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 10:17 AM
A wonderful sight to see mom bird taking care of her babies. Nice monoku for spring. love phyl
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 9:10 AM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be a, Nice monoku for spring. I enjoy hearing the birds sing as I go writing away. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 8:36 PM
Beautiful monoku, just in time for Mother’s Day! Nice one, Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 9:08 AM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be a, Beautiful monoku. I enjoyed writing about these birds singing away. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
M  Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 2:33 PM
How very lovely Paula…fills my heart also! Debx
Goldsmith Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 2:48 PM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be, very lovely. I love hearing the birds sing. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........
Goldsmith Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 1:11 PM
Spring Monoku ~ Date Written:5/10/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet......
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