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Spring Is Not All

Spring is not all good when it steals my charms Losing poise with joy as I run around With bright flowers on hands, I stretch my arms Twirling and cheering as colors abound. Spring is not all fun each day of my life When bees sting my eyes, lips then spiders bite While collecting bright hues with my cute knife I endure all pains, thinking such prize is right. Spring is not all beneficial to health Sneezing a lot one day, so light headed Rashes appear on flawless skin, my wealth Oh, spring! Your lover is much rewarded. Spring is not all, it’s not moon, stars or sun Under one dark sky… its surprise, still grand! Feb. 19, 2023 5.51pm Spring Is Not All Contest Judged: 3/2/2023 3:37:00 PM Sponsored by: Michelle Faulkner Place 4 (up to 4th and HM multi-w)

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/3/2023 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Spring has both good/bad. I love Spring and her good side. Have a great/blessed day......................

Len Gasun
Date: 3/4/2023 3:32:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Paula. God bless you always and your writngs.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/3/2023 3:08:00 AM

"Spring is not all beneficial to health" - well analyzed. A beautiful sonnet. Congratulations!

Len Gasun
Date: 3/4/2023 3:31:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Christuraj. God bless you always.

Valsa George

Date: 3/1/2023 6:31:00 PM

You are absolutely right Len. Spring has its adverse side too. Flowers are so beautiful. But many are allergic to the pollen from certain flowers, making them sneeze endlessly. All the Best dear friend.

Len Gasun
Date: 3/4/2023 3:29:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Valsa for stopping by to read my poem, your best wishes and uplifting words. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/27/2023 7:51:00 AM

Yes, spring is very much a mixed bag--lovely blooms and the resulting sneezes. Good job, Len. Janice

Len Gasun
Date: 3/1/2023 7:17:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comments my dear friend Janice. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs