Len Gasun Poet Sonnet

Spring Is Not All

Spring is not all good when it steals my charms
Losing poise with joy as I run around 
With bright flowers on hands, I stretch my arms
Twirling and cheering as colors  abound.

Spring is not all fun each day of my life
When bees sting my eyes, lips then spiders bite
While collecting bright hues with my cute knife
I endure all pains, thinking such prize is right.       

Spring is not all beneficial to health
Sneezing a lot one day, so light headed
Rashes appear on flawless skin, my wealth
Oh, spring! Your lover is much rewarded. 

Spring is not all, it’s not moon, stars or sun
Under one dark sky… its surprise, still grand!

 
Feb. 19, 2023     5.51pm
Spring Is Not All
Contest Judged:  3/2/2023 3:37:00 PM
Sponsored by: Michelle Faulkner
Place 4 (up to 4th and HM multi-w)

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Paula Goldsmith March 3, 2023 at 6:17 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Spring has both good/bad. I love Spring and her good side. Have a great/blessed day...................... Len Gasun March 4, 2023 at 3:32 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Paula. God bless you always and your writngs.

Christuraj Alex March 3, 2023 at 3:08 AM "Spring is not all beneficial to health" - well analyzed. A beautiful sonnet. Congratulations! Len Gasun March 4, 2023 at 3:31 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Christuraj. God bless you always.

Valsa George March 1, 2023 at 6:31 PM You are absolutely right Len. Spring has its adverse side too. Flowers are so beautiful. But many are allergic to the pollen from certain flowers, making them sneeze endlessly. All the Best dear friend. Len Gasun March 4, 2023 at 3:29 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Valsa for stopping by to read my poem, your best wishes and uplifting words. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Janice Canerdy February 27, 2023 at 7:51 AM Yes, spring is very much a mixed bag--lovely blooms and the resulting sneezes. Good job, Len. Janice Len Gasun March 1, 2023 at 7:17 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comments my dear friend Janice. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs