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Spring Is Coming Soon

Snow draped folds like loose Cashmere curtains cover the evergreen boughs pining for the lengthening days of each succeeding sunrise, reticent to see the cold of night fall once again on the lonely landscape. In this fallow world of darkness quiet is the norm, hushed silence, nothingness, invading the shadows that fall ominously across the reaching branches giving a sense of preternatural sleep to each living creature, each plant, inhabiting the frigid winter's lonely, desolate abode. Surreptitiously, the awakening begins, slowly and without notice, Cyclamen hidden deep in the forest break free from their frozen bed of bounteous soil oblivious to the naked dreaming deciduous trees that surround them. Malaise broken, they reach their softly painted petals to the warmth of the sun in perfect unison dancing the Danse Macabre to remind winter of its inevitable demise. Narcissus will soon send forth his papery white blossoms to mock the glow of the radiant gleen of the melting frost. Summer still distantly drowsing cares not for the struggle of life born out on frozen winter days and Autumn is but a memory now glowering in its ostentatious robes of leafy brilliance; though, the nor'easter may yet blow, just look and you'll see the signs, Spring is coming soon. 03/23/17

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Date: 4/4/2017 2:27:00 PM
You have given life to every feature of the landscape, James, with vivid imagery. And you've successfully tackled a form that is difficult. I love the way spring slowly awakens in your poem. Best wishes in the contest!
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James Inman
Date: 4/5/2017 7:39:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and sweet comment Carolyn.
Date: 4/3/2017 3:24:00 PM
wowowow, this is a definite seven for descriptiveness and beautiful imagery of spring. I hope it placed high. CONGRATS I see are in order!!
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James Inman
Date: 4/4/2017 8:05:00 AM
Thank you for the wow comment Andrea.
Date: 3/31/2017 3:45:00 PM
Great write and win...Congrats
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James Inman
Date: 3/31/2017 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 3/31/2017 7:58:00 AM
Love how you mention not only Spring but the other seasons as well; awesome depiction! Congratulations on a fine win James!~Che :)
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James Inman
Date: 3/31/2017 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Cheryl.
Date: 3/31/2017 2:42:00 AM
I think this is one of my favourites James - love the similie in the first line and the unique vocabulary throughout the poem:-) many congrats I am adding this to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 3/31/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Jan. I think Laura was looking for a more bright and up beat take on the theme.
Date: 3/30/2017 10:38:00 PM
Marvelous vocabulary accompanies your acrostic. I enjoyed the way you wrote it and want to congratulate you on a fine poem and your placement. You put a lot of work into this piece.
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James Inman
Date: 3/31/2017 8:10:00 AM
Thank you. I had to search for yours. It was lovely, sorry it wasn't on the winners list.
Date: 3/30/2017 7:57:00 AM
d work put into this acrostic, I really enjoyed the rhythm, I feel that is very important in acrostics...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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James Inman
Date: 3/31/2017 7:43:00 AM
Thanks for hosting the contest Laura. You had some beautiful entries. I enjoyed reading all of them. Thank you again for your hard work.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/30/2017 7:57:00 AM
"hard work"
Date: 3/26/2017 3:47:00 PM
James well done..what an amazing acrostic poem~
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James Inman
Date: 3/27/2017 1:26:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment BW.

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