Spring Is Coming Soon Premiere Contest Winner

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Image result for fantasy girl in the spring

Sweet, spring wrap your arms around me,
Place me in an emerald forest, green;
Rain, gently fall and make my world clean-
I run through a wildflower meadow carefree,
Narrow trails beckon me to follow their labyrinthine;
Gamboling, frolicking baby ducks play on a pond aquamarine.

Ice cold storms are gone away,
Such delight- the song of a blue jay.

Cajoling, coaxing mother duck tries to keep order,
Oh, in this nirvana there is no clock . . . 
Melodious forest tunes like a symphony by Bach-
Inside this forest nature blooms in manic disorder
Nearby, on a branch the call of a hawk . . .
Getting tired-  I rest on a sunny rock.

Shasta daisies sway and dance-
Oh, I am a travelling pleasure-seeker,
Oh, flocks of flying birds call to me from a loudspeaker;
Nothing is more beautiful than a spring happenstance . . . 

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March 18, 2017

Acrostic Rhyme/Spring Is Coming Soon
Copyright Protected, ID 885372 

Spring Is Coming Soon- Acrostic
sponsor, Laura Loo

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/31/2017 3:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Constance! Really well done!
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Date: 3/30/2017 11:25:00 PM
Big Congrats to win top position on your sweet poem. Love
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Date: 3/30/2017 8:17:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Constance! Loved the imagery and flow, congrats on your top win :)
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Date: 3/30/2017 4:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, love the first line.
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Date: 3/30/2017 11:39:00 AM
You set a great tone with the first line, congratulations Constance...
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Date: 3/30/2017 9:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this lovely spring poem.
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Date: 3/30/2017 9:32:00 AM
Lovely, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 3/30/2017 8:38:00 AM
Beautifully written BW.
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Date: 3/30/2017 7:50:00 AM
oh beautiful Broken Wings! "Narrow trails beckon me to follow their labyrinthine; Gamboling, frolicking baby ducks play on a pond aquamarine."--- Those two lines caught my eye like no other..lovely and serene and smooth acrostic! thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 3/18/2017 8:36:00 PM
One of my favourites so far. Good Luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/18/2017 3:00:00 PM
Great entry BW, best wishes...
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Date: 3/18/2017 1:15:00 PM
A very rewarding frolic for me! Can't get enough odes to Spring and I sure enjoyed yours. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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