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Premiere Contest WinnerSpring Is Coming Soon

Sweet, spring wrap your arms around me,
Place me in an emerald forest, green;
Rain, gently fall and make my world clean-
I run through a wildflower meadow carefree,
Narrow trails beckon me to follow their labyrinthine;
Gamboling, frolicking baby ducks play on a pond aquamarine.

Ice cold storms are gone away,
Such delight- the song of a blue jay.

Cajoling, coaxing mother duck tries to keep order,
Oh, in this nirvana there is no clock . . . 
Melodious forest tunes like a symphony by Bach-
Inside this forest nature blooms in manic disorder
Nearby, on a branch the call of a hawk . . .
Getting tired-  I rest on a sunny rock.

Shasta daisies sway and dance-
Oh, I am a travelling pleasure-seeker,
Oh, flocks of flying birds call to me from a loudspeaker;
Nothing is more beautiful than a spring happenstance . . . 

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March 18, 2017

Acrostic Rhyme/Spring Is Coming Soon
Copyright Protected, ID 885372 

Spring Is Coming Soon- Acrostic
sponsor, Laura Loo

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Wolf Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 3:01 AM
Congrats on your win, Constance! Really well done!
Dutta Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Big Congrats to win top position on your sweet poem. Love
Leiser Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 8:17 PM
Beautiful poem, Constance! Loved the imagery and flow, congrats on your top win :)
Kinch  Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 4:23 PM
Congratulations on your win, love the first line.
Smith Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 11:39 AM
You set a great tone with the first line, congratulations Constance...
Krampe Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Congrats on your win with this lovely spring poem.
Roper Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Lovely, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win ~*
Inman Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Beautifully written BW.
Scars Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 7:50 AM
oh beautiful Broken Wings! "Narrow trails beckon me to follow their labyrinthine; Gamboling, frolicking baby ducks play on a pond aquamarine."--- Those two lines caught my eye like no other..lovely and serene and smooth acrostic! thank you and congrats :) -luloo
Ritz Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 8:36 PM
One of my favourites so far. Good Luck in the contest!
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 3:00 PM
Great entry BW, best wishes...
Godwin Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 1:15 PM
A very rewarding frolic for me! Can't get enough odes to Spring and I sure enjoyed yours. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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