Spring is born



Spring rolls into the valleys and hills
Leaving mountains with dots of white snow
The warm breeze chases away the chills

Robin bounce along to cawing crow
It's a wildlife dance to welcome spring
Leaving mountains with dots of white snow

The wind chimes sway in air as they sing
Anticipation, no wonder why
It's a wildlife dance to welcome spring

Puffy, white clouds float across blue sky
Bushes sway with buds ready to bloom
Anticipation, no wonder why

The birth of flowers, still in the womb
Soon, the vibrant colors will be born
Bushes sway with buds ready to bloom

Last autumn's leaves blow wrinkled and torn
Spring rolls into the valleys and hills
Soon, the vibrant colors will be born
The warm breeze chases away the chills

Heidi Sands

4/16/24

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Date: 4/25/2024 10:39:00 PM
Spring is truly birth giving season, flowers in your garden you never knew you had begin to open up as the warm weather caresses their buds to open up. And it is a season one can walk around and admire wild flowers as well, blossoms on trees open into vibrant colors. We are ending our 2nd month of Autumn and the leaves have turned every winter color you can imagine, our temperatures up to today have been hot, today is rather cold. Awesome Wrire Heidi, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/26/2024 7:27:00 AM
Yes, you are right about Spring. Thank you so much Jennifer. I appreciate your comment. I hope you have a nice day . Blessings :)
Date: 4/24/2024 2:31:00 PM
The imagery in this poem is so pretty. "In like a lion, out like a lamb" here in upstate New York. Your poem would 'look' beautiful in water colors. Such a delightful one!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/24/2024 4:10:00 PM
Nice to hear. I do oil paintings, not water color, but painting is fun too. I am grateful for your visit and kind feedback ! :)
Date: 4/21/2024 1:52:00 PM
...very nice write.....spring is here today for sure....it started off sunny and about 10' C.....then two hours of hail, snow, thunder/lightning; it all melted quick, but it was darn entertaining.....stan sand
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Date: 4/23/2024 1:28:00 PM
Thank you Stan. This Spring sure has had a mixture of weather. Wow hail. We had an April Northeaster with heavy snow. I hope all is well :)
Date: 4/18/2024 7:10:00 AM
Dear Heid, your poem shows a wondrous portrait of nature's awakening. Through your words, I feel the gentle embrace of the warm breeze and the anticipation of new life bursting forth. I loved the scenes of mountains with dots of white snow juxtaposed with buds ready to bloom, capturing the essence of transition and renewal. Your verse reminds me of the beauty found in the cycles of nature, offering peace and hope in times of change. - Blessings, Daniel
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/18/2024 7:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Daniel. I appreciate your kind feedback and I am happy that you like this and received so much from reading it. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 4/18/2024 5:37:00 AM
A lovely poem, my friend. Beautiful imagery of a spring day, Heidi.
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Date: 4/18/2024 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Jerry :)
Date: 4/17/2024 7:10:00 AM
Spring rolls in with beautiful blooms, Wonderful write Heidi
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Date: 4/17/2024 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. :)
Date: 4/17/2024 5:57:00 AM
Woven in inspiration of spring, your poem depicts it-- in splendid imagery, my friend. Sights and sounds adorn your canvas throughout, Heidi. A FAVE for me.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/17/2024 6:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay. I appreciate your support and the Fave too. It means a lot to me. I hope you have a nice spring day today :)
Date: 4/17/2024 5:42:00 AM
Have a wonderful sweet spring season dear lovely dear Heidi :-)
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Date: 4/17/2024 6:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Abdullah ! I hope you have a beautiful day :)
Date: 4/16/2024 9:28:00 PM
This is a marvelous poem. I like the terzanelle style. The difference between waning winter and blooming spring was easy to discern.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/17/2024 5:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Hilda :)
Date: 4/16/2024 3:31:00 PM
Hello Heidi, a beautiful poem about spring. My fav. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2024 11:10:00 AM
Hello Heidi, Your welcome my friend. I do like it. As I was reading your poem, i knew it would be a fav. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/16/2024 3:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend. I am happy you like it and considerate a Fave. I appreciate it. Hugs :)
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