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As of right now, I am still using my husband's computer

I have a new one bought but I have to get it set up. 

I can only do a little work at a time then I give out so I don't know when it will happen. 

Forgive me for not answering any comments as fast.  SK

Spring Invites The River To Return

Down where the privet hedge blooms And doves sing their coos A woman feeds the birds Now her life resumes God's love is an ocean And mine a small-streamed river The tide comes in and rejuvenates The small stream's thirst for life Dear Lord in your son's name Let the water flow And my life like spring flowers blossom Amen
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Mitra Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 7:26 PM
The joy of a small streamed river is a small part of the big Ocean...All of us need to complete our little roles and responsibilities. Wonderful thought provoking poem
Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Why, thank you, Debjani. I appreciate the visit and nice review. Sara K
Poet Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 4:58 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, pleasure to read it today
Kerr Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 1:50 PM
Congratulations to you, Sara, on your selection with this haunting piece. As always I appreciate your comment on my placement. Sincere best wishes with regard to your computer launch and set up. Howard
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 2:20 PM
Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the nice comments and best wishes. I still haven't got that computer up and running. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 2:11 AM
God's love is an ocean And mine a small-streamed river This is excellent.
Jones Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 2:42 PM
Beautiful write! Amen!
Empress Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 11:52 AM
Ah this is so soul warming and comforting to read dear sara, so glad also that you got a new computer, hope it gets set up soon, i really love th lines "God's love is an ocean And mine a small-streamed river The tide comes in and rejuvenates" i agree with you and i feel that totally! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always
George Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 5:27 AM
A very sweet prayer. God, as an ocean and you as a small stream- is an apt comparison. Enjoyed your poem, dear Sara. I am having too many assignments at the home front. So I am able to comment only on poets who write comments on my poems, that too out of courtesy.
Suri Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 10:36 AM
What a special piece! I love your talent for writing serene works. Hope your computer is set up well!
Proxenos Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 1:51 AM
You have a special way of writing about birds and nature, I love your style which in essence is your great talent. Hope you are keeping well dear Sara. love and blessings. Jennifer
Rolland Avatar
April 24, 2025 at 6:28 PM
great poetry and message so "cool" have a nice day
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 12:11 PM
wow, I love this one you wrote, sara. It's a fave for me.
Kendrick Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 4:42 PM
Andrea, I am glad that you love this one and that you have faved it. I am honored that you did. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 9:10 AM
What a Lovely write you have here. I enjoyed reading this one. Great Picture... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a great spring day............
Kendrick Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 4:41 PM
Not for a contest, Paula. I appreciate your visit and nice comment. Sara K
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