Spring Invites The River To Return

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As of right now, I am still using my husband's computer

I have a new one bought but I have to get it set up.

I can only do a little work at a time then I give out so I don't know when it will happen.

Forgive me for not answering any comments as fast. SK

Down where the privet hedge blooms And doves sing their coos A woman feeds the birds Now her life resumes God's love is an ocean And mine a small-streamed river The tide comes in and rejuvenates The small stream's thirst for life Dear Lord in your son's name Let the water flow And my life like spring flowers blossom Amen

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/28/2025 2:11:00 AM

God's love is an ocean And mine a small-streamed river This is excellent.

Karen Jones

Date: 4/26/2025 2:42:00 PM

Beautiful write! Amen!

Ink Empress

Date: 4/26/2025 11:52:00 AM

Ah this is so soul warming and comforting to read dear sara, so glad also that you got a new computer, hope it gets set up soon, i really love th lines "God's love is an ocean And mine a small-streamed river The tide comes in and rejuvenates" i agree with you and i feel that totally! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always

Valsa George

Date: 4/26/2025 5:27:00 AM

A very sweet prayer. God, as an ocean and you as a small stream- is an apt comparison. Enjoyed your poem, dear Sara. I am having too many assignments at the home front. So I am able to comment only on poets who write comments on my poems, that too out of courtesy.

Reya Suri

Date: 4/25/2025 10:36:00 AM

What a special piece! I love your talent for writing serene works. Hope your computer is set up well!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/25/2025 1:51:00 AM

You have a special way of writing about birds and nature, I love your style which in essence is your great talent. Hope you are keeping well dear Sara. love and blessings. Jennifer