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Spring Hues

Hues I see at start of spring, 
Vibrant fresh blooms much joy bring;
With tints of love comes Holi, 
To smear hues at each other with glee. 

Date: 03/03/2022
For Andrea Dietrich's MARCH IN Poetry Contest
Using LIND30 form

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John Watt

Date: 5/26/2022 4:11:00 PM

Ani, this is a very nice merging of celebrations: spring and Holi. The colors no doubt bring great joy to the lucky participants... blessings ~ John

Paul Callus

Date: 5/5/2022 9:19:00 AM

The festival of colours and spring both bring joy and love, Anitha. Yours is a delightful LIND30 form in rhyme. ~ Warm regards // paul

Susan Lawrence

Date: 3/20/2022 9:06:00 AM

Love this Ani ! I can see the blooms and feel the birth of Spring . Fun and exciting all the way through ! Big hugs my friend , Susan :) xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/16/2022 9:41:00 AM

Cute. Give us more poems.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2022 4:21:00 PM

It's nice seeing some of the comments you got on this one, Ani. I hope you find time to write some new poems, and I will try to answer your email tomorrow.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/14/2022 8:08:00 PM

"Vibrant fresh blooms, smear hues at each other with glee" Such a beautiful image. I can see this moment in my mind. Your thoughts whisper spring and I am enjoying the melody. This is simply breathtaking, my dear sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jan Allison

Date: 3/14/2022 3:47:00 PM

lovely imagery and rhyme Ani, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Silent One

Date: 3/14/2022 1:54:00 PM

You did this form so well, it is a short one but you packed it with imagery..

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/13/2022 7:09:00 PM

Connected beautifully with the Indian festival. Beautiful rhyming verse. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2022 3:19:00 PM

oh how nice this is your poem, Ani. I knew of this holiday because a town nearby me celebrates it and I heard of the paint they throw. Big congrats to you.

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 3/14/2022 8:08:00 AM

Yes Ria... Holi is the festival of colours... Thank you for the contest and my placement my friend... I enjoyed writing for this... Hugs... ~ Ani

Joseph May

Date: 3/4/2022 3:54:00 PM

Ah yes, the sweet blooms of spring, Very nicely penned Anitha

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/4/2022 12:38:00 PM

Anitha, I enjoyed your poem, especially like the words "tints of love." you painted a nice picture with your words. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings ~ Debra