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Spring Has Sprung

Dainty daffodils
raise golden trumpets
announcing the news
the snow has melted -
mother nature thrives

Green leaves dress trees
baby birds chirp
little lambs leap
time of rebirth

Spirits lift
as sunshine
warms our face

I just
adore

Spring!


Spring Diminished Hexaverse Contest Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Caren Crutsinger

03/06/21

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/5/2021 8:48:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Yes, I also adore Spring, your write and beautiful pictures. Have a blessed day/week.......... Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/9/2021 8:26:00 PM Spring feels more hopeful this year, and this is so alive, I really like 'Dainty daffodil raise golden trumpets' and little lambs leap' you are the spring queen :) Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/8/2021 6:29:00 PM Me three! Sweet, sweeter, sweetest. C'mon Spring. Door's open for you and the light's on! :) gw Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 3/8/2021 11:03:00 AM Oh Me Too! Am anxiously awaiting the first buds in my garden. Love these pics. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/8/2021 11:22:00 AM Thanks Judy:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2021 9:43:00 AM - Described so beautifully, Jan ... - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/8/2021 11:22:00 AM Thanks Anne-Lise:-)hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/7/2021 8:02:00 AM What a delightful entry for the contest, Jan! Daffodils do look like trumpets and I love the way you describe the lambs and birds. You work well in this form, Jan. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/8/2021 8:14:00 AM thanks Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/7/2021 1:31:00 AM A wonderful poem and picture. Spring is just crawling in this year. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2021 3:27:00 AM It has arrived later this year, in 2019 we had daffodils blooming on Christmas day!:-( hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser Date: 3/6/2021 11:12:00 PM So do I and those little ones are adorable! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2021 3:26:00 AM Thanks ML:-) hugs jan xx

Juliet Ligon Date: 3/6/2021 7:49:00 PM I love your picture of daffodils as golden trumpets. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2021 3:26:00 AM thanks Juliet:-) hugs jan xx

Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/6/2021 6:15:00 PM Lovely words Jan to welcome the joys of Spring. Heard that you’re all back lockdown, let’s hope it won’t be for long for you and us too. ~ Belle :-) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2021 3:26:00 AM oh Belle it is dreadful here the numbers rising on a dramatic level it will be months not weeks for us, all schools now closed perhaps they should have done that when one child was infected as its spread so rapidly with the youngsters now:-(hugs jan xx

Mark Koplin Date: 3/6/2021 4:44:00 PM "Green leaves dress trees" How true and boy am I looking forward to it. Great one Jan!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/6/2021 4:54:00 PM Its in full pomp here mark lambs in the fields and daffodils in the garden, we were due to go on 'the daffodil walk' with some of our friendship group but its cancelled because we are in lockdown. There are literally thousands of flowers by a private estate but there is a walk where the public can see the flowers:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 3/6/2021 4:17:00 PM Hi Jan, It’s nice to you back again. You have penned a well-written spring write. The scene that you created is a splendid display of spring. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/6/2021 4:52:00 PM Thanks Alexis, its good to be back I've been under the weather and not even logged on the computer till today:-( hugs jan xx

J. Summers Date: 3/6/2021 3:12:00 PM I love double D’s...daffodils and ducks. Good poem, but I expect we may get an argument or two from old man writer before it’s all over. John Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/6/2021 3:53:00 PM Yes i reckon March will come back and bite us in the backside... probably this week :-( :-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin Date: 3/6/2021 2:58:00 PM A sweet Spring poem Jan! Hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/6/2021 3:52:00 PM Thanks Tania:-):-):-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan Date: 3/6/2021 1:53:00 PM Your diminished hex certainly does not diminish to promise of Spring. Very well written, Jan. I'm so glad you're feeling better. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/6/2021 3:51:00 PM Thanks so much jenna, I've only logged back on today looks like I missed a lot of fun and games - not:-( hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/6/2021 1:37:00 PM Nice to see you back Jan, lovely spring verse and good luck. Hope you're feeling better. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/6/2021 3:50:00 PM Thanks Tom its good to be back to normal:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer Date: 3/6/2021 12:46:00 PM beautifully done, jan! you make me believe that it's really on its way. ~ best of luck in the contest! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/6/2021 3:50:00 PM thanks Ilene it is well and truly here, I have seen newborn lambs in the field this week and dainty daffodils in the garden:-) hugs Jan xx