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Spring Haiku

Spring haiku Vivid colours splashed, Nature celebrates *holi, Is onset of spring ! Written March 11th, 2015 For contest "Traditional haiku" by Debbie *Holi is a festival of colours in India wherein vibrant colours derived from nature are splashed over each other to mark celebrations, denotes the onset of spring ! Awarded HM

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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/20/2015 2:00:00 PM
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Congrats! Methinks spring has FINALLY arrived here in Canada! YEE HAW! Love and hugs, Jack xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/16/2015 5:14:00 PM
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love the imagery a 7 congratulations on your win
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/13/2015 2:36:00 PM
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Upma hon you have 3 parts - and past tense!-here- I will show you two parts [vivid colors splash/ on the holi celebrants:sneezes and laughter] no capitalization because haiku is open ended the reader must have the ability to decide for himself what comes the moment before and after. Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/12/2015 10:13:00 PM
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hey, another person did Holi too!! i bet it is so wonderful. Congrats on winners' list.
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2015 12:40:00 PM
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Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Julia Ward
Date: 3/12/2015 9:03:00 AM
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"Vivid" is a good word in a poem... I must use it in one of mine. Julia, xx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/12/2015 7:55:00 AM
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:) beautiful Dr. Upma.. :) I have read some of the festivals celebrated in India and they are really are colorful. :)! //olive eloisa
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2015 5:56:00 AM
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You captured the image perfectly - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/11/2015 8:14:00 AM
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Thnx Jan!

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