Spring Haiku

fields of spring flowers
watered by mountain snow melt-
path wandering uphill 

cherry blossoms fall
covering pathway in pink-
spider web drifting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, Barbara
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 8:55 PM
Congratulations on a fine win with these little gems Barbara.
Guzzi Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 4:47 PM
There's 2 fine haiku [simple as porridge] simply lovely. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gorelick Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 5:08 PM
Thank you Deb. I appreciate the feedback and the help. BG
Halliday Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Liked these, too. Thanks for commenting on mine.
Kendrick Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 9:14 AM
Great unique and creative winning work..Way to go..Congrats on this wonderful work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win! Lori
Jackson Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations for your win. I loved the imagery in your poem. Best wishes Linda x
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:11 PM
Love these, Barbara. I was so amazed to see this contest judged just now. congrats to you.
George   Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 5:37 AM
ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS!!! LAINIE
Mehta Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 9:48 AM
Nice images penned well, Barbara
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 1:57 AM
- Beautiful haiku X 2, Barbara !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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