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Spring Haiku

clean sheets nearly dried as they flap in april's breeze . . . the sudden shower March 27, 2021 for Tania Kitchin's Spring Haiku - Traditional Form Poetry Contest 17 syllables as checked by howmanysyllables.com

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/7/2021 10:57:00 AM

Spring does have an unpredictable and capricious side, Andrea. You have captured that perfectly! So fun! Congratulations on your win. Easter blessings to you! Also love the reference to the smell of linen dried on a clothesline.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/6/2021 11:21:00 AM

i can relate to this one, andrea, the number of times i've dashed out to get washing in haha congrats on your win! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/5/2021 5:36:00 PM

Your lovely haiku evokes such freshness, Andrea! Congratulations on your win. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2021 12:12:00 PM

many congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/5/2021 12:05:00 PM

I like seeing these different takes on spring. A refreshing view! Congrats on your win, Andrea! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

Date: 4/4/2021 10:28:00 AM

Lovely write Andrea, Congrats on your win

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/4/2021 7:37:00 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your silver placement with your vivid haiku!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/3/2021 10:21:00 PM

I remember running out there trying to rescue the wash before the rain began to pelt me!

Alkas Poetry

Date: 3/30/2021 6:09:00 AM

Beautiful image sheets spread in the bucolism of a sudden April rain... Só Nice dear Andreas salute alkas

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/28/2021 11:22:00 AM

- Really great, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless

Date: 3/28/2021 10:32:00 AM

twice washed.....

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/28/2021 8:38:00 AM

Excellent Haiku, Andrea, a gorgeous sight to behold and is followed immediately by a stunning impact of a sudden shower. Best wishes in the contest, warm hugs