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Spring Habit

plain and naked oaks
white-out-green on ev’ry branch —
neighbors disappear

2/23/2021
Spring Traditional Haiku
Sponsor: Malabika Choudhury

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2021

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March 6, 2021 at 12:41 PM

Congrats on your win, Kim ~

March 6, 2021 at 2:29 PM

Thank you, Line!

Paula Goldsmith

March 4, 2021 at 1:40 PM

Congratulations on your win. Love the spring tree coming alive and your write. Have a blessed day...........

March 4, 2021 at 2:02 PM

Thank you!

March 3, 2021 at 10:43 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

March 4, 2021 at 4:40 AM

God bless you too, Beata! Thank you!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

March 3, 2021 at 7:36 PM

Congratulations on your win ~ Mala

March 3, 2021 at 8:14 PM

Thank you, Mala!

Brian Sambourne

March 3, 2021 at 7:31 PM

What an interesting 3rd line. Love how it invites speculation. Best wishes. Be well, Brian

March 3, 2021 at 8:14 PM

Thank you, Brian!

Constance La France

March 3, 2021 at 8:24 AM

Kim, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with your wonderfully penned Haiku poem, well done _Constance

March 3, 2021 at 8:13 PM

Thank you, Constance!

Kai Michael Neumann

February 26, 2021 at 7:37 AM

Nice one ...

February 26, 2021 at 9:26 AM

Thank you, Kai!

February 26, 2021 at 5:10 AM

Congratulations in advance... This one would definitely be placed. Love the imagery! And good luck... Regards, Paghunda

February 26, 2021 at 9:26 AM

Thank you, Paghunda!

February 25, 2021 at 8:43 PM

I hope the oak does not make a habit of its new habit. ~ Little Sisters of the Poor

February 26, 2021 at 3:56 AM

:)

February 25, 2021 at 7:25 PM

Looks like a contending haiku for the contest. Good luck with it.

February 25, 2021 at 7:35 PM

Thank you :)

February 25, 2021 at 10:45 AM

That's the best part! Aloha! Rico

February 25, 2021 at 2:53 PM

Aloha! Thanks, Rico!

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 25, 2021 at 2:29 AM

- I had a neighbor who kept a lot of weird things in the garden ...it was a pleasure when the leaves on the trees covered "the trash" :) - Best wishes in the contest, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

February 25, 2021 at 4:52 AM

LOL! Thankfully I have pleasant neighbors.

February 24, 2021 at 11:31 PM

very nice! love the white-out-green line :)

February 25, 2021 at 4:52 AM

Thank you, Susan!

Victor Buhagiar

February 24, 2021 at 11:01 PM

The oak can hide all the surroundings.

February 25, 2021 at 4:52 AM

For sure! Looking forward to the Spring.

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