Notes About The Poem

Spring Goosebumps

Gray skies and heavy fogs
Gusty wind with hovering calls
Downpour of cold raindrops 
Soaking wet oak treetops

Swaying meadows of hilltops
Delighted deer grazing on grass
Green pasture and turkey flocks
Blue pond with two mallards

Pink moon’s gleams at dawn
Silvery-pink dusting on lake-top
Scatters of nippy dewdrops
Chilly goosebumps on arms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 4:51 PM
Dear Smita, your rich textured imagery is a feast for the senses.. the beautiful grandeur of dawn spills across my imagination with ease, bringing me into this precious moment where I long to linger. Loved "nippy dewdrops"! Exquisite, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Kulkarni Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 10:54 AM
So sweet of you Susan for your encouraging feedback! I always enjoy reading your poems!
Lawrence Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 8:54 AM
Love this Smita . I was immediately transported to the scene which you beautifully described in nuanced details . I could sense, see and feel the environment. Best to you , Susan :)
Kulkarni Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Thank you Susan for your visit and your kind words! I enjoyed reading it :)
Sands Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 6:07 AM
This is very beautiful . Well written :)
Kulkarni Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Pandit Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Excellent spring images, Smita. This is among your best-- for the exquisite details that bring forth the scenes for the reader.
Kulkarni Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 11:01 AM
Thank you Vijay for your encouraging feedback!
Baker Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Great imagery, Smita. You communicated the feelings excellently. Have a great week! Bill
Kulkarni Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 11:03 AM
Thank you for your visit and your kind words Bill!
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