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Spring Goosebumps

Gray skies and heavy fogs
Gusty wind with hovering calls
Downpour of cold raindrops 
Soaking wet oak treetops

Swaying meadows of hilltops
Delighted deer grazing on grass
Green pasture and turkey flocks
Blue pond with two mallards

Pink moon’s gleams at dawn
Silvery-pink dusting on lake-top
Scatters of nippy dewdrops
Chilly goosebumps on arms

Copyright © Smita Kulkarni | Year Posted 2023

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Susan Ashley Date: 4/22/2023 4:51:00 PM Dear Smita, your rich textured imagery is a feast for the senses.. the beautiful grandeur of dawn spills across my imagination with ease, bringing me into this precious moment where I long to linger. Loved "nippy dewdrops"! Exquisite, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Smita Kulkarni Date: 4/23/2023 10:54:00 AM So sweet of you Susan for your encouraging feedback! I always enjoy reading your poems!

Susan Lawrence Date: 4/16/2023 8:54:00 AM Love this Smita . I was immediately transported to the scene which you beautifully described in nuanced details . I could sense, see and feel the environment. Best to you , Susan :) Login to Reply Smita Kulkarni Date: 4/23/2023 11:00:00 AM Thank you Susan for your visit and your kind words! I enjoyed reading it :)

Heidi Sands Date: 4/16/2023 6:07:00 AM This is very beautiful . Well written :) Login to Reply Smita Kulkarni Date: 4/23/2023 11:00:00 AM Thank you Heidi!

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/16/2023 5:49:00 AM Excellent spring images, Smita. This is among your best-- for the exquisite details that bring forth the scenes for the reader. Login to Reply Smita Kulkarni Date: 4/23/2023 11:01:00 AM Thank you Vijay for your encouraging feedback!

Bill Baker Date: 4/12/2023 7:20:00 AM Great imagery, Smita. You communicated the feelings excellently. Have a great week! Bill Login to Reply Smita Kulkarni Date: 4/23/2023 11:03:00 AM Thank you for your visit and your kind words Bill!