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Gray skies and heavy fogs Gusty wind with hovering calls Downpour of cold raindrops Soaking wet oak treetops Swaying meadows of hilltops Delighted deer grazing on grass Green pasture and turkey flocks Blue pond with two mallards Pink moon’s gleams at dawn Silvery-pink dusting on lake-top Scatters of nippy dewdrops Chilly goosebumps on arms

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Date: 4/22/2023 4:51:00 PM
Dear Smita, your rich textured imagery is a feast for the senses.. the beautiful grandeur of dawn spills across my imagination with ease, bringing me into this precious moment where I long to linger. Loved "nippy dewdrops"! Exquisite, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 4/23/2023 10:54:00 AM
So sweet of you Susan for your encouraging feedback! I always enjoy reading your poems!
Date: 4/16/2023 8:54:00 AM
Love this Smita . I was immediately transported to the scene which you beautifully described in nuanced details . I could sense, see and feel the environment. Best to you , Susan :)
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 4/23/2023 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Susan for your visit and your kind words! I enjoyed reading it :)
Date: 4/16/2023 6:07:00 AM
This is very beautiful . Well written :)
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 4/23/2023 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 4/16/2023 5:49:00 AM
Excellent spring images, Smita. This is among your best-- for the exquisite details that bring forth the scenes for the reader.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 4/23/2023 11:01:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your encouraging feedback!
Date: 4/12/2023 7:20:00 AM
Great imagery, Smita. You communicated the feelings excellently. Have a great week! Bill
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 4/23/2023 11:03:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and your kind words Bill!

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