Spring Freedom

a teeny tiny mouse shyly skitters among the crisp-dried leaves and deadfall the teeny tiny mouse believes that Spring has sprung to free him from his burrow when fragrant flowers rise with soaring sleepy heads teeny tiny mouse snuffles as jasmine entices teeny tiny mouse to run free and scurry through the fields
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Daniel Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 9:46 PM
Great imagery, Linda:)
Fowler Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Thank you for your kindness Jo! :)
Volumes Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 6:13 PM
Lovely Linda, I adore Jasmine and feel like that little mouse does when its in full bloom. Delightful poem. Enjoyed reading it so much
Fowler Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 7:14 PM
My vines are awesome this year - so full of blooms. I love it! I'm glad you like them, and the tiny little mouse lovin' them too. :) Thanks for stopping by!
Sands Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Great one. Well done :)
Fowler Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 8:12 AM
Thanks Heidi!
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