Spring Forward Yowzzah

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Golden Andy the dandy had bling when he leapt from his bed with a spring the golden ring in his - he kept warm with a sock while his gal sang where's my ding-a-ling?

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/29/2015 9:01:00 AM

Another wonderful write, Debbie, a 7. Blessings dear friend

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2015 9:05:00 AM

Good one, Debbie. Like Andrea I too remember that song. All the best...spring on till spring arrives! // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2015 12:17:00 AM

you naughty girl!!! I remember I used to play that record all the time in my house as a teenager. My stepdad loved it and mom just scowled at me.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/20/2015 6:17:00 PM

Creative Limerick..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 2/20/2015 1:36:00 AM

Very funny Debbie...NB..I have altered my limerick to your prescription and learnt from you today..I value any future comments.....thanks...Peter

Adell Foster

Date: 2/18/2015 8:13:00 PM

Peals of laughter, my friend. Indeed Mr. Andy appears to be a dandy especially if he has his gal singing 'where's my ding-a-ling?' Yowzzah! Thank you for sharing this humorous read.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 2/18/2015 11:28:00 AM

Wow a cool rhyming poem witty and super and does make us smile. Nice to read u again take care.