Spring Forward

I can't hear, said the man to his wife
Did you say, that you're holding a knife?!

with her hands hid behind
a smile not truly kind

Lunging forward he sprang for his life!




Submission for poetry contest:  Spring Forward (Limerick)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 12:13 PM
brilliantly penned! good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
Shaw Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 6:15 PM
Hi Jan! Thank you so much for the kind encouragement and the good luck! Hugs, Kimberly xx
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