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Spring Forward 2

There once was a seed in the ground
Waiting for Spring to come around
Her patience gave way
Came up anyway
Now she is frozen to the ground

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/22/2015 9:39:00 AM

Wow Janet marvelous. My fav. God bless

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/22/2015 2:04:00 PM

Thank you Rajat

Constance La France

Date: 2/19/2015 11:35:00 AM

Janet, I really like it, poor little seed, I have no idea how you could make this better than it already is, which is wonderful and thanks for visiting ~~

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/19/2015 11:50:00 AM

Thank you and have a wonderful day. Janet

Tim Ryerson

Date: 2/19/2015 10:15:00 AM

Poor little seed! That's what she gets for being impatient...VERY funny stuff here Janet with perfect rhythm and meter as well. I think you have a winner here...

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/19/2015 11:49:00 AM

Thanks Tim. It was fun to write. Janet

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/19/2015 9:34:00 AM

Ha ha, this is great!

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/19/2015 11:49:00 AM

Thank you Richard. Janet

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/19/2015 7:21:00 AM

Got a big kick out of this one, Jan!!! Loved it... hugs, Jack xxx

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/19/2015 7:57:00 AM

Thanks Jack

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/19/2015 5:16:00 AM

This is real cute and true too. The way our planet is warming, plants will start blooming earlier because the weather is warmer than normal for the time of year, and then a temperature drop freezes them overnight! A great Limerick Janet!

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/19/2015 5:18:00 AM

Thank you Connie

Nathan D.

Date: 2/18/2015 10:38:00 PM

lol very cute limerick made me laugh

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/19/2015 5:15:00 AM

Thank you Nathan and thanks for stopping by

Jan Allison

Date: 2/18/2015 7:05:00 PM

Great limerick Janet your poems are coming on a treat my friend - keep writing i'll keep reading:-) Hugs jan xxx

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/19/2015 5:14:00 AM

Thank you Jan

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/18/2015 4:47:00 PM

Oh yes you are getting it the rhythm is marvelous - now remember [especially for me it need not be a true rhyme] if you used CROWN you would not have to use ground twice! [Now she's frozen from tip to crown.] It took me years longer than you! You smarty pants! Light & Love

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 4:49:00 PM

Oh I like that though. I'm getting it:) But I couldn't have done it without your help. Thanks a bunch

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/18/2015 3:58:00 PM

Very cute, Janet. But it does happen! Limericks are a lot of fun, and you seem to have mastered it. Hugs, Sandra

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 4:41:00 PM

I think I may just about have this one conquered Thanks Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 2/18/2015 3:01:00 PM

For a beginner in writing Limericks I must raise my hat to you (even if I don't have one!). Thus I give you a 7 rating. All the best, Janet. // paul

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 4:40:00 PM

Thank you Paul. I am a work in progress:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2015 2:19:00 PM

awww, poor frozen flower!! Cute one. Is this a limerick contest? I really hope to try it then.

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 2:26:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I am not putting this in the contest because I am just learning how to do this and Debbie helped me to learn how it should flow. So would not be fair. But next time I will be they have a limerick contest I will be entering:) Janet

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/18/2015 1:06:00 PM

Good little limerick with a wholesome feel good beat. Emile. #7

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 1:56:00 PM

Thank you Emile, I have struggled with this form, but I think I may be getting it:) Janet

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/18/2015 11:33:00 AM

- A great one, Janet !!!! - I'm really bad at limerick :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 12:52:00 PM

"Thanks Anne Lise. I am trying to learn, I think I might be getting the hang of it finally:) Hugs Janet"

Edwin Hofert

Date: 2/18/2015 11:00:00 AM

Janet. Would it be ok to just call me Ed? I used it for some kind of professional appearances. And it turns out I guess I ain't all that crazy about it after all lol. Thank you. P.S. I will answer to whatever you decide.

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 11:11:00 AM

I would be happy to do that Ed. :) I try not to shorten somebodies name without there permission as some people are not accustom to that of informality. Thanks:) Janet

Edwin Hofert

Date: 2/18/2015 10:19:00 AM

Awesome! I personally am in serious need of learning and practicing some different styles. I loved your poem. A 7

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 10:23:00 AM

Thanks Edwin, I am working on it. These 5 lines took me forever to write. lol But I so enjoy learning a new style. Janet

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