Spring Footle

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petals settles fragrant radiant birds fly up high we stroll to Seoul I bloom with whom? want clue? it's you. 2 April 2022 Notes: The picture of cherry blossoms was taken yesterday as we stroll to watch the blossoming flowers. A Brian Strand Standard Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand 1st place

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2022 3:50:00 AM

I have quickly read your winning entry in Brian's contest and found it worthy of its honor. Congrats. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/9/2022 12:29:00 AM

"I bloom with whom...." goes incredibly well with the ending.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/6/2022 10:29:00 AM

Just delightful JCB! "Petals, settles." Love the playful riddle at the end! Congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/5/2022 6:26:00 AM

Cute and congrats!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/5/2022 1:00:00 AM

Great footle on spring. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2022 6:37:00 PM

I see several people doing footles. You came up with a great series

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/2/2022 8:24:00 AM

Your footle is so evocative of romance, with few words you paint a lovely picture~

Valsa George

Date: 4/1/2022 8:43:00 PM

Beautiful .....Jez ! I knew you were intoxicated with the cherry blossoms when i received a series of pictures of your stroll in the cherry garden.... !

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/1/2022 9:07:00 PM

You are right my friend. They were intoxicating. You know the feeling when you stroll beneath them--so magical and dreamy!