JC Brul Poet Footle

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Spring Footle

petals
settles

fragrant
radiant

birds fly
up high

we stroll
to Seoul 

I bloom
with whom?

want clue?
it's  you.


2 April 2022

Notes: The picture of cherry blossoms was taken yesterday as we stroll to watch the blossoming flowers.


A Brian Strand Standard Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
1st place

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Sara Kendrick April 9, 2022 at 3:50 AM I have quickly read your winning entry in Brian's contest and found it worthy of its honor. Congrats. Sara

Caren Krutsinger April 9, 2022 at 12:29 AM "I bloom with whom...." goes incredibly well with the ending.

Sam Kauffman April 6, 2022 at 10:29 AM Just delightful JCB! "Petals, settles." Love the playful riddle at the end! Congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend.

Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2022 at 6:26 AM Cute and congrats!

Christuraj Alex April 5, 2022 at 1:00 AM Great footle on spring. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2022 at 6:37 PM I see several people doing footles. You came up with a great series

Michelle Faulkner April 2, 2022 at 8:24 AM Your footle is so evocative of romance, with few words you paint a lovely picture~

Valsa George April 1, 2022 at 8:43 PM Beautiful .....Jez ! I knew you were intoxicated with the cherry blossoms when i received a series of pictures of your stroll in the cherry garden.... ! JC Brul April 1, 2022 at 9:07 PM You are right my friend. They were intoxicating. You know the feeling when you stroll beneath them--so magical and dreamy!