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Spring Flower

Spring Flower

Long fine hair, 
that lay softly across her shoulders, 
and trailed down her back, 
all the way to her waist. 
The colors of brown and yellow and gold. 
Mixed as one, autumn comes to mind. 
Yet the time, it is spring.

Her gown is green, every shade, 
like the forest when the sun shines...
through the trees in small open spaces, 
between the clouds of a summer storm. 
Never the same in any given place. 

She rides a unicorn. 
A horse of mythic proportions. 
I stand at the rim of the cliff watching. 
They ride to the water's edge, 
to get a drink. 
I am mesmerized, 
and find I wish to be nearer, 
than before. 
I step closer. 
The boundary gains a pace or two. 
Death is happy. 

She is singing, 
I can hear her now.
On the breeze, of the morning, 
the one that brings everything new 
to the land,
and takes all things old...
away. 

The song is beyond my thoughts, 
I can not hear the words, 
the melody haunts my heart, 
and lifts my spirit. 
She is magic...
surely, 
and I
have stepped off the cliff, 
in love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 2:11 AM
Your metaphoric write has sung a special song, and pierced my heart in a loving way.
Foster Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 10:49 AM
Lets go have tea in the forest near the lake... we can watch all the fancy birds from there... Ann
Wolf Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 10:30 PM
Mystical, Magical, Mystery Tour with Ann. Wow! Breathtaking poetry, my friend. Thanks for the privilege of reading it. Blessings, Gershon
Foster Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 11:05 AM
You are ever so kind my friend. A superhero yourself with a pen...
Woodrow Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 11:13 AM
reading this made me feel swept away too! such a beautiful write...like spring :)
Foster Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 11:05 AM
You are ever so kind. Ty for passing by little friendly butterfly... Ann
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