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Spring Flaw

Spring's classic charm - highly overrated, Perhaps because it follows winter sleet. Its new beginnings too animated, Its poetic praise rather obsolete. Forget the fragrant flowers’ faulty fact, They come with mucky, rainy, fungal soil, Outraging my respiratory tract, Sending my sinuses into turmoil. Way worse - the whooping wake of ugly bugs! Buzzing, you bet, for an imminent bite, I deem them all to be invasive thugs, Let alone their unwelcome horrid sight. Spring's in the air, lovers' first stolen kiss?! Pollen is there, a nightmare, not a bliss! February 16, 2023

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Date: 11/21/2023 1:08:00 PM
Very nicely penned Margarita, Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/3/2023 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Please no bugs for me. Have a great/blessed day......................
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Date: 2/18/2023 8:27:00 AM
Really good! I can relate to and feel the mood. I hope it places high in the competition :-)
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Date: 2/17/2023 12:19:00 PM
Lovely sonnet Margarita, really well penned with good imagery and insightfulness too bringing out lovely thoughts of spring. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 2/17/2023 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Gordon, I thought I was convincing it’s not so lovely as requested:)

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