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Spring Fever

Spring is here, a great a reprise. A gentle flower-scented breeze. Robins sing in roundelay. Flowers bloom in full array. The buds are bursting on the trees! Contest: Wow Me in 5 Lines Ralph Taylor

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Date: 4/22/2011 1:57:00 PM
Delightful description of spring, Ralph. Think you meant "I get a reprise." Keep the words flowing and your heart open. Have a fabulous holiday weekend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/20/2011 8:21:00 PM
Im wowed! love the robins line. BG
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Date: 4/20/2011 4:52:00 PM
(I that a typo in the first line?) Anyway, I like how you incorporated so many of the senses into this small poem. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/20/2011 4:34:00 PM
great job on this contest entry, ralph!
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