Spring Fever

Spring is here, a great a reprise.

A gentle flower-scented breeze.

     Robins sing in roundelay.

     Flowers bloom in full array.

The buds are bursting on the trees!


Contest:  Wow Me in 5 Lines
                Ralph Taylor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 1:57 PM
Delightful description of spring, Ralph. Think you meant "I get a reprise." Keep the words flowing and your heart open. Have a fabulous holiday weekend! Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 8:21 PM
Im wowed! love the robins line. BG
Susan Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 4:52 PM
(I that a typo in the first line?) Anyway, I like how you incorporated so many of the senses into this small poem. Good luck in the contest!
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 4:34 PM
great job on this contest entry, ralph!
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