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Spring Sun shine Approaching To warm the days New baby lambs born With cool breezes blowing. Sweet perfume filling the air Colorful blooms are everywhere The Kookaburra laughs like a clown Jasmine spills across the wall round the tree.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 3/10/2024 3:05:00 AM

Love this visually delightful spring poem dear Wen. The picture is gorgeous too. You have captured all the glory of spring. I would love to see and hear a Kookaburra! That last line, in particular evokes such a happy feeling as you picture jasmine spreading its beauty! Many congratulations with your win in the contest. Hope you have had a lovely, peaceful Sunday. Hugs to you dearest friend xx

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/10/2024 4:16:00 AM

They look like a dowdy brown brother of the kingfisher, Chris and their call really does sound like they are laughing. Jasmine is my favorite part of spring. I don't cut it back in our garden, I let it grow every where and at the first sign of spring when those tiny white flowers appear, the perfume comes in the house and to the delight of our neighbors it fills the air all around with perfume. Thank you for that lovely comment my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2024 2:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your winner in Tania's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/10/2024 4:17:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara, lovely of you to comment. Have a lovely day. Wen

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/4/2024 8:37:00 AM

Congratulations my dear Wen! Vivd imagery that evokes a breath of spring air. :)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/4/2024 11:22:00 AM

Lovely comment Laf thank you so much.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/3/2024 12:52:00 PM

Wendy, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely poem!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/4/2024 7:00:00 AM

Thanks Tania Its Appreciated.

Jay Narain

Date: 2/19/2024 8:38:00 AM

Nice poem to welcome beautiful spring.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 2/19/2024 9:37:00 AM

Thanks so much Jay.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/19/2024 2:54:00 AM

So beautiful how youv written your etheree! I love the descriptive flow of your lines. And the way youv painted imagery: the last line however i think you wanted to write “ jasmine” .. its always good to read your work. Thank you for your kind comments on my poems while i was away. Appreciate always your support. Best wishes for the contest

Speaks Volumes
Date: 2/19/2024 3:45:00 AM

Thanks Empress, I always say " A friend is a spell checker" But some Aussies would say .. "if that doesn't spell Jasmin, wot does it spell? Loved your comment. Thank you so much. Wen

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/19/2024 1:54:00 AM

- The beautiful spring ... your poem describes what I long for, S.V. :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes
Date: 2/19/2024 3:49:00 AM

Thanks lovely Anne-Lise I am glad you liked it.. Dont worry your spring will be here soon. We on the hand , are just waiting for Autumn.. : >)