Tania Kitchin Poet Rictameter

Spring Dreams

Springtime
Dreaming of warmth
Flower stems peeking out
Vibrant, rainbow colored petals
Warm morning breeze wafting of lilac blooms
Hummingbirds sipping at feeders
Chartreuse goldfinches sing
Perching in trees
Springtime

1/15/23
Contest: Pen a Rictameter, Hopes of Spring's Return
Sponsor: M. L. Kiser
( used howmanysyllables to check poem)

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Hat Bueckert January 31, 2023 at 8:17 AM Great imagery Tania, this so makes me want spring :) congrats! Tania Kitchin January 31, 2023 at 4:22 PM Hat, thank you!

Mahtab Bangalee January 28, 2023 at 9:13 PM excellent imaginative poetic diction; great to read; congrats Tania Kitchin January 29, 2023 at 8:28 AM Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2023 at 3:09 PM back with my congrats on your well deserved win, Tania Tania Kitchin January 29, 2023 at 8:28 AM Andrea, thank you!

Paula Goldsmith January 28, 2023 at 7:21 AM Congratulations on your win. A fun write. For now, Spring is just a dream. It will be here very soon. Have a blessed day/weekend................ Tania Kitchin January 28, 2023 at 8:38 AM Paula, thank you!

Linda Alice Fowler January 28, 2023 at 6:39 AM I love chartreuse goldfinches. Congratulations on your win Tania! :) Tania Kitchin January 28, 2023 at 8:38 AM Linda, thank you!

Sara Kendrick January 26, 2023 at 2:24 AM It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I like the topic you used. Thank you for dropping by my page with congratulations. I appreciate you taking the time to do so. Sara Tania Kitchin January 28, 2023 at 8:38 AM Sara, thank you!

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2023 at 7:33 PM So lovely. That rictameter contest is inspiring some real beauties. Tania Kitchin January 28, 2023 at 8:38 AM Andrea, thank you!

Victor Buhagiar January 16, 2023 at 2:44 AM , you make me yearn for Spring. Lovely poem. Tania Kitchin January 16, 2023 at 4:50 AM Victor, yes, I am am as well! Thanks for your visit.

Jenna Logan January 15, 2023 at 3:15 PM It’s the season of new growth and the promise of hope. I really love your lines, Tania. Tania Kitchin January 15, 2023 at 3:32 PM Jenna, thank you!

Paula Goldsmith January 15, 2023 at 12:00 PM Your "Spring Dreams" is a lovely write. I love Spring. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away.............. Tania Kitchin January 15, 2023 at 1:32 PM Paula, thank you!

Tom Cunningham January 15, 2023 at 11:44 AM That beautiful season when everything starts coming alive again,I hope it's not to long in coming. Good luck in the contest Tania, hope you are having a lovely weekend. Tom Tania Kitchin January 15, 2023 at 1:32 PM Tom, thank you! I hope you're having a great weekend as well!