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Spring Dreams

Springtime Dreaming of warmth Flower stems peeking out Vibrant, rainbow colored petals Warm morning breeze wafting of lilac blooms Hummingbirds sipping at feeders Chartreuse goldfinches sing Perching in trees Springtime 1/15/23 Contest: Pen a Rictameter, Hopes of Spring's Return Sponsor: M. L. Kiser ( used howmanysyllables to check poem)

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I Am Anaya

Date: 2/9/2023 10:22:00 AM

Each line brings imagery--I've never even imagined Chartreuse goldfinches! They are beautiful, from South of Canada. Congratulations Tania, on your win!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/9/2023 4:11:00 PM

Anaya, thank you!

Hat Bueckert

Date: 1/31/2023 8:17:00 AM

Great imagery Tania, this so makes me want spring :) congrats!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/31/2023 4:22:00 PM

Hat, thank you!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/28/2023 9:13:00 PM

excellent imaginative poetic diction; great to read; congrats

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/29/2023 8:28:00 AM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2023 3:09:00 PM

back with my congrats on your well deserved win, Tania

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/29/2023 8:28:00 AM

Andrea, thank you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/28/2023 7:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fun write. For now, Spring is just a dream. It will be here very soon. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/28/2023 8:38:00 AM

Paula, thank you!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/28/2023 6:39:00 AM

I love chartreuse goldfinches. Congratulations on your win Tania! :)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/28/2023 8:38:00 AM

Linda, thank you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 2:24:00 AM

It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I like the topic you used. Thank you for dropping by my page with congratulations. I appreciate you taking the time to do so. Sara

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/28/2023 8:38:00 AM

Sara, thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2023 7:33:00 PM

So lovely. That rictameter contest is inspiring some real beauties.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/28/2023 8:38:00 AM

Andrea, thank you!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/16/2023 2:44:00 AM

, you make me yearn for Spring. Lovely poem.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/16/2023 4:50:00 AM

Victor, yes, I am am as well! Thanks for your visit.

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/15/2023 3:15:00 PM

It’s the season of new growth and the promise of hope. I really love your lines, Tania.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2023 3:32:00 PM

Jenna, thank you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/15/2023 12:00:00 PM

Your "Spring Dreams" is a lovely write. I love Spring. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2023 1:32:00 PM

Paula, thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/15/2023 11:44:00 AM

That beautiful season when everything starts coming alive again,I hope it's not to long in coming. Good luck in the contest Tania, hope you are having a lovely weekend. Tom

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2023 1:32:00 PM

Tom, thank you! I hope you're having a great weekend as well!