Spring Dream

Have you ever had a dream
Where you float in blue stream
And time melts like vanilla ice cream 
And your mind is stuck in between
Yellow sun which slides on a string
Followed by melodic moon that sings
A sweet pink song about spring
Then it begins to softly rain
Brown birds bathe do their thing
To the worms in the grass so green
Nature is a wild animal scene
The smells and sounds are intoxicating 
The tastes of the fruits so amazing 
The sights for your eyes inviting
And so you find peace exciting 
You wake up refreshed delighting
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Romios Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 11:24 AM
Wow! I love how the imagery moved me! ‘The sun sliding on a string’… not being one who is great on imagery, I admire your skill! Mind if I Fav it!? Pangie
Jones Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 12:03 PM
I’d be honored if you fav it Pangie! Thanks for making my day! I am struggling to write better daily!
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