Spring Ditty

Oh, this lovely warming trend,
mild temperatures wind does send,
flowers bud and birds awaken,
snows are past, to be forsaken,
sweaters are shed, and mittens too,
sky is now a beautiful blue,
but most of all, I think you’ll guess,
I like that now---people wear less.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Frankel Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 3:05 PM
Great poem! Really enjoyed it. From ... a man ... :)
Tidd Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 11:37 AM
you know, I could have been gender neutral by switching "women" with "people," and I might just.
Pettit Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 2:27 PM
They will wear even less when summer comes around. This ditty is quite pretty from someone who is witty.
Tidd Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Aw shucks! I just sometimes like writing the funny idea that pops in my head.
Smith Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 1:18 PM
Very Nice Jim.....kudos Tim
Tidd Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Thanks.
Torres Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 1:13 PM
ha ha... women wear less!!! ..that's perfect on spring... awesome!!!! ^__^
Tidd Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 2:35 PM
Thanks. You haven't been reading my emails. Let me know when you will be hanging out in the sun! :)
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