Spring Dh

Spring has sprung at last
Lambs gambolling free
New shoots fresh and green
Bulbs give birth to blooms
Daffs in all my rooms

My spirit soars
From winters gloom
Sun permeates
In every room

Skies of blue
Lots to do
Dreams anew

See friends
Find peace

Spring

Written: 29th March 2019
Contest: Diminished Hexaverse Contest About Spring
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

2nd place

Contest May 2019 Premier 1
Sponsor Brian Strand
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 10:59 AM
Frothing with joy! Congratulations!
Gilmour Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Lovely comment Kim, many thanks and kindest thoughts Ann xx
Awtry Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 10:06 PM
"sun permeates in every room" Joy shining in each stanza :) Congratulations!
Gilmour Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Oh wow, I love your comment PS, many thanks and kindest thoughts Ann xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 7:38 PM
very spring-y!!! Love it and congrats for your win.
Gilmour Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 6:52 PM
Haha, I love spring-y and so glad you love it too Andrea, for it always means a lot to me each time you visit - thanks! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Faulkner Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 7:20 PM
Very deft weaving of rhymes within your touching ode to spring, congratulations, Ann!
Gilmour Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 6:50 PM
Many thanks Michelle for your lovely comments and congrats, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:13 PM
- A wonderful poem, Ann - I look forward to seeing the lambs ... they are so cute :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gilmour Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:20 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your kind comments and I hope you see some lambs very soon. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Sergi Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 1:59 PM
A BLESSED ROUTINE!
Gilmour Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 2:22 AM
Many thanks Ralph for your lovely comment and how nice to meet you! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Trifiatis Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 4:34 AM
Festive verses heralding artfully Spring's arrival. Excellent dear Ann!
Gilmour Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 5:39 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios for your lovely comment. Spring is my most favourite time of the year and it always lifts my spirit after the grey dark winter months have taken their toll! I feel renewed and ready to take on whatever comes my way, though hopefully it will be gentle as I am not getting any younger, Haha. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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