Spring Day

SPRING DAY

the park is full

of green grass,

hula hoops,

labradoodles with their people.

shoes on rocks and sand,

alongside the creek.

motorized toy car

splashes through water,

under wood plank bridge.

a flower here, a flower there

on the root infested path.

parking lot flooded

with our car and theirs.

infectious drum is beating,

everyone is greeting

this loveliest Spring day.

4/29/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 8:49 AM
'parking lot flooded' - such a vivid phrase; I can see the park - Very descriptive!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 9:17 AM
Thanks! It was a fun day! I have never seen this park so full! And it was 7:00 p.m.! We have had gentle Spring weather. Still cool in the mornings!
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