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Spring Day

SPRING DAY the park is full of green grass, hula hoops, labradoodles with their people. shoes on rocks and sand, alongside the creek. motorized toy car splashes through water, under wood plank bridge. a flower here, a flower there on the root infested path. parking lot flooded with our car and theirs. infectious drum is beating, everyone is greeting this loveliest Spring day. 4/29/2018

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Date: 5/1/2018 8:49:00 AM
'parking lot flooded' - such a vivid phrase; I can see the park - Very descriptive!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2018 9:17:00 AM
Thanks! It was a fun day! I have never seen this park so full! And it was 7:00 p.m.! We have had gentle Spring weather. Still cool in the mornings!

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