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Spring Dawn Beautiful Leap

Written: March 25, 2025, for contest sponsored by Constance La France

Quote: Spring is for concepts and projects, and autumn is a second spring where each leaf is a rose. By Poet

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In the misty dawn, above the shimmering pane, 
a gossamer haze swirls, poised for a vibrant leap. 
With hawthorn heralding its velvety seep, 
birds glorious melodies are mellifluous and plain.

Vortex winds blow over the thawed ground,
as life's poetry boldly finds its voice.
In every way, a magnificent renewal to rejoice!
For the whisper of bloodroot knows no bounds.

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Paula Goldsmith April 2, 2025 at 10:48 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write and quote. Pretty Picture... Have a fun/blessed day as you write away...........

Sam Kauffman March 31, 2025 at 11:15 AM Congratulations on your win, my friend. Each carefully chosen word works with the other to create a place "where poetry finds its voice" as spring returns! This is truly a wonderful picture painted with beauty. Blessings of spring to you, Lasaad!

Krishnanand Guptar March 31, 2025 at 5:10 AM Back with heartiest congratulations, dear poet, for your top placement in this poetry contest with a marvellous poem celebrating nature`s beauty with its vibrance "as life's poetry boldly finds its voice." Wish you a pleasant week.

Terry Miller March 31, 2025 at 2:47 AM Eight beautiful lines indeed Sotto, congratulations

Victor Buhagiar March 30, 2025 at 9:51 PM This poem, Sotto, really deserves a first placing.

thriveni c mysore March 30, 2025 at 9:15 PM Words weighed in gold. Lovely write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Valsa George March 30, 2025 at 8:51 PM Beautiful quote and a lovely poem! It is so fascinating to see how each poet welcomes the arrival of spring with beautiful lines. When a gifted poet like you do it, it creates waves of joy in others. "In the misty dawn, above the shimmering pane, a gossamer haze swirls, poised for a vibrant leap." Thus nature is waiting for a vibrant leap. Hearty Congratulations dear Lasaad on your first place win.

Linda Alice Fowler March 30, 2025 at 6:12 PM Love our quote dear Las. Your poem is full of sweet nature! Congratulations! :)

CayCay Godwin March 27, 2025 at 5:51 AM You have indeed composed 8 beautiful lines; enjoyed each of them. Head's up - directions say the word 'beautiful' must be in title. I don't want to see this poetic write tossed on a technicality. All the best ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2025 at 10:57 AM - How beautiful this is to read, Las :) - Amazing :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Jay Narain March 26, 2025 at 10:54 AM Nice creative poem.

Ink Empress March 26, 2025 at 10:14 AM A very seasonal poem this is dear sotto, your quote is so very creative and i love the way youv woven words too here in such a creative manner! So descriptive and your choice of words are stunning and beautiful! I especially love the lines “ Vortex winds blow over the thawed ground, as life's poetry boldly finds its voice.” so dreamy and soulfully moving! And the ending is profound! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always! Best wishes for the contest