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Spring Daffodils

tiny yellow stars
wave to greet a soothing breeze
spring daffodils bloom


3-27-2021
Enter the 'Spring Haiku - Traditional Form' Poetry Contest
Tania Kitchin

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2021 5:24:00 PM so glad you got a win. Congrats. I loved this one. Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/16/2021 12:45:00 PM Thank you Andrea.

Jan Allison Date: 4/5/2021 12:30:00 PM Dropping back with many congrats on your win M L xx:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/16/2021 12:45:00 PM Thank You Jan.

Kim Merryman Date: 4/5/2021 12:16:00 PM A lovely spring haiku, ML! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/16/2021 12:45:00 PM Thanks Kim.

Tania Kitchin Date: 4/4/2021 7:42:00 AM Congratulations on your bronze placement with your gorgeous haiku! Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/16/2021 12:45:00 PM Thanks Tania.

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/30/2021 2:13:00 PM They are stars, aren't they?! Hadn't thought of them that way until your haiku awakened me to the possibility! Thanks, gw Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/1/2021 8:41:00 PM Little stars decorating cups. Thanks Gershon.

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/29/2021 5:22:00 AM Reminds me of the poem by Wordsworth,"I Wondered Lonely As A Cloud". You have done the daffodils a lovely description. Thanks for the visit by my work. Sara Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/1/2021 8:41:00 PM Wow, thanks for the compliment!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/28/2021 2:15:00 PM this is really cute. I hope she accepts fewer syllables as traditional. I happen to prefer the shorter-lined haiku like you have written. Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/1/2021 8:42:00 PM I do too, thanks Andrea. I took a course in writing Haiku and there's almost no going back to the 5/7/5, for me.

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/28/2021 2:32:00 AM Daffodils do have the loveliest yellow color. I like the way you describe them waving "to greet a breeze." A lovely haiku for the contest. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/1/2021 8:42:00 PM Many thanks.

Judy Ball Date: 3/27/2021 4:58:00 PM I do love the Daffodils. So bright and sunny. Nice job here . Hope it's a winner. God Bless, JB Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/1/2021 8:42:00 PM Thanks Judy.

Jan Allison Date: 3/27/2021 2:23:00 PM just gorgeous ML:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/1/2021 8:42:00 PM Thank you.

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/27/2021 2:17:00 PM I like the metaphor you used--they are indeed yellow stars--the daffodils. All the best. Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/1/2021 8:42:00 PM Thanks Vijay.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2021 12:03:00 PM - A clear sign that spring is coming ... lovely haiku, M.L. :) - Good luck in the contest - Enjoy your weekend and have a great Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 4/1/2021 8:43:00 PM They are blooming here. Thanks.