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Spring Daffodils

tiny yellow stars wave to greet a soothing breeze spring daffodils bloom 3-27-2021 Enter the 'Spring Haiku - Traditional Form' Poetry Contest Tania Kitchin

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2021 5:24:00 PM

so glad you got a win. Congrats. I loved this one.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/16/2021 12:45:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2021 12:30:00 PM

Dropping back with many congrats on your win M L xx:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/16/2021 12:45:00 PM

Thank You Jan.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/5/2021 12:16:00 PM

A lovely spring haiku, ML! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/16/2021 12:45:00 PM

Thanks Kim.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/4/2021 7:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your bronze placement with your gorgeous haiku!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/16/2021 12:45:00 PM

Thanks Tania.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/30/2021 2:13:00 PM

They are stars, aren't they?! Hadn't thought of them that way until your haiku awakened me to the possibility! Thanks, gw

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/1/2021 8:41:00 PM

Little stars decorating cups. Thanks Gershon.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/29/2021 5:22:00 AM

Reminds me of the poem by Wordsworth,"I Wondered Lonely As A Cloud". You have done the daffodils a lovely description. Thanks for the visit by my work. Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/1/2021 8:41:00 PM

Wow, thanks for the compliment!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2021 2:15:00 PM

this is really cute. I hope she accepts fewer syllables as traditional. I happen to prefer the shorter-lined haiku like you have written.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/1/2021 8:42:00 PM

I do too, thanks Andrea. I took a course in writing Haiku and there's almost no going back to the 5/7/5, for me.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2021 2:32:00 AM

Daffodils do have the loveliest yellow color. I like the way you describe them waving "to greet a breeze." A lovely haiku for the contest. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/1/2021 8:42:00 PM

Many thanks.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/27/2021 4:58:00 PM

I do love the Daffodils. So bright and sunny. Nice job here . Hope it's a winner. God Bless, JB

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/1/2021 8:42:00 PM

Thanks Judy.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/27/2021 2:23:00 PM

just gorgeous ML:-) hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/1/2021 8:42:00 PM

Thank you.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/27/2021 2:17:00 PM

I like the metaphor you used--they are indeed yellow stars--the daffodils. All the best.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/1/2021 8:42:00 PM

Thanks Vijay.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2021 12:03:00 PM

- A clear sign that spring is coming ... lovely haiku, M.L. :) - Good luck in the contest - Enjoy your weekend and have a great Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/1/2021 8:43:00 PM

They are blooming here. Thanks.