Spring Contest Entry

All winter they slept,
the fingers of their roots entwined,
friend clutching friend.
All winter they slumbered, 
sustained by the last of summers' bright syrup.
No wonder, then, with the melting of the snow
their dreams overflow and burst the banks;
No wonder, then, the tightly wound colors of their dreams
slip through cracks of bark,
and slowly begin to open
like yawning springs of the clocks.

Spring contest, host Craig Cornish
4/29/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 10:32 PM
A lovely poem, Jack. Congrats on your win.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:36 PM
Gorgeous piece of poetry Jack! Enjoyed. Congratulations on your win!
Inman Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:05 PM
Great metaphor, imagery and personification Jack.
Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Congratulations on your placement win. Enjoyed it.
Cornish Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 2:00 PM
Jack, thank you for honoring my contest with your inspiration---I obviously thought it to be exceptional.
Richards Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 1:37 PM
Oh yes....!! I love the last line especially! Such a wonderful metaphor this is ! Congrats to you Jack!
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