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Fragments of first spring sun illuminate A blithe wave of fluttering pinnate leaves. Passerine dulcet birds cradled they wait Ethereal rain under narrow eaves. Honeysuckle comes alive drawing straight. Daisies bright, butterflies by the wheat sheaves. Around garden's heart breathing once anew A spider's web in tears form morning dew. 2/2082021 Spring Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 3/4/2021 6:30:00 PM
Nice example of an ottava rima poem.
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Date: 2/28/2021 3:00:00 AM
WoW! Eve, This is just beautiful. It compliments the Spring season very well. Spring sings in this well-written piece. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/26/2021 1:21:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2021 5:28:00 PM
Wonderful Eve. We are still awaiting Spring's first entrance here in Alberta. Love the pic. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/24/2021 2:40:00 PM
Perfect words to entice us for Spring. Please come soon. Love this piece Eve. Hugs Michael...
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Date: 2/24/2021 8:46:00 AM
Beautiful imagery. Those last two lines are brilliant!
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Date: 2/23/2021 11:49:00 AM
oh, this is beautiful
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Date: 2/22/2021 3:49:00 AM
Fantastic imagery and use of the English language Eve, had to look up pinnate, glad I did, your final lines amazing, A spiderweb in tears, where’d you find such words, best of luck in the contest, cheers David
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Date: 2/20/2021 8:23:00 PM
Eve, You cast a Spring dream so well in the morning dew. -Richard
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Date: 2/20/2021 11:41:00 AM
A delightful ottava rima. Loved your descriptions. ~~
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Date: 2/20/2021 10:08:00 AM
- Awe ... I love spring ... you made a perfect picture, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/20/2021 3:56:00 AM
Wow! so delightful and delighting from the start til the end... making me behold the beauty of spring in my "springless" country. God bless you.
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