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Spring Awakens

The first light of Spring washes away night Penetrates Winter's forest of dead leaves Staining each tree in a soft yellow light Leaving my mind to enchantments conceived Fading to dust is a sky of dusk gray While sun rises with coats of flowing gold Melting away clouds as they try to stay Warming each flower so petals unfold Welcoming soft mornings, birds on the wing Quietly searching for their hungry feast A path I will walk to hear them all sing In awe of Nature, of which I am the least To see Spring flowers, so captive in form To wander in light, so precious so warm contest Flower Song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/2/2015 9:23:00 AM
Beautiful, spring lines, Frederic...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/30/2015 6:46:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 3/29/2015 11:38:00 AM
Lovely write. Congratulations! Kim :)
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Date: 3/28/2015 10:15:00 PM
wonderful ,my friend and congrats for your win.
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:19:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/6/2015 4:49:00 AM
This is a lovely poem filled with colorful images of spring Frederic. Congratulations on having it featured as POTD!
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Date: 3/5/2015 8:51:00 PM
http://www.thepetitionsite.com/188/569/134/a-snowball-for-peace/# Need to start pushing the peace initiative. Great poem. Jim Horn
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Date: 3/5/2015 6:10:00 PM
a delightful sonnet Frederic - good luck in the contest and congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/5/2015 4:51:00 PM
Congrats on Poem of the Day. It was a great read! I can't wait for spring weather and this makes me long for it even more!
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Date: 3/5/2015 2:37:00 PM
Such a beautiful descriptive write a 7, and congratulations on Poem of the Day
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Date: 3/5/2015 12:47:00 PM
Such a delightful offering, David. Spring is already in your heart and mind! #7 Congrats on POTD. // paul
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Date: 3/5/2015 11:43:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet, Frederic...congrats on being chosen TPOD! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/5/2015 9:44:00 AM
Hey Frederic, BIG congratulations on your lovely poem being chosen for POTD!! A beautiful tribute to Spring. Well deserved. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 3/5/2015 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations, a fine choice for poem of the day.
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Date: 3/5/2015 8:51:00 AM
Beautiful with such imagery. Congrats on poem of the day. Hugs Janet
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Date: 3/5/2015 8:09:00 AM
Congrats on your poem of the day :)
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:44:00 AM
- Congratulations, Frederic !!! - well deserved, a good choice of p.o.t.d. ! - Spring is a lovely time !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/4/2015 2:36:00 PM
i relish the scene of flowers set against the backdrop of spring, Frederick... a wonderful and delightful thought this is...huggs
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 3/5/2015 10:00:00 PM
a POD indeed!
Date: 3/3/2015 9:56:00 PM
Beautiful..I love the first line especially. Well done and I expect it will do well...BG
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