Spring Awakens

The first light of Spring washes away night
Penetrates Winter's forest of dead leaves
Staining each tree in a soft yellow light
Leaving my mind to enchantments conceived
Fading to dust is a sky of dusk gray
While sun rises with coats of flowing gold
Melting away clouds as they try to stay
Warming each flower so petals unfold
Welcoming soft mornings, birds on the wing
Quietly searching for their hungry feast
A path I will walk to hear them all sing
In awe of Nature, of which I am the least

To see Spring flowers, so captive in form
To wander in light, so precious so warm


contest Flower Song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Beautiful, spring lines, Frederic...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 6:46 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Nunez Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 11:38 AM
Lovely write. Congratulations! Kim :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 10:15 PM
wonderful ,my friend and congrats for your win.
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 12:19 PM
dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 4:49 AM
This is a lovely poem filled with colorful images of spring Frederic. Congratulations on having it featured as POTD!
Horn Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 8:51 PM
http://www.thepetitionsite.com/188/569/134/a-snowball-for-peace/# Need to start pushing the peace initiative. Great poem. Jim Horn
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 6:10 PM
a delightful sonnet Frederic - good luck in the contest and congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs Jan xx
Cervenka Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 4:51 PM
Congrats on Poem of the Day. It was a great read! I can't wait for spring weather and this makes me long for it even more!
Roper Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 2:37 PM
Such a beautiful descriptive write a 7, and congratulations on Poem of the Day
Callus Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 12:47 PM
Such a delightful offering, David. Spring is already in your heart and mind! #7 Congrats on POTD. // paul
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 11:43 AM
A beautiful sonnet, Frederic...congrats on being chosen TPOD! Hugs, Rhonda
Romaine Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Hey Frederic, BIG congratulations on your lovely poem being chosen for POTD!! A beautiful tribute to Spring. Well deserved. Be Blessed, Neva
Lamoureux Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations, a fine choice for poem of the day.
Eaton Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 8:51 AM
Beautiful with such imagery. Congrats on poem of the day. Hugs Janet
Nance Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 8:09 AM
Congrats on your poem of the day :)
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 7:44 AM
- Congratulations, Frederic !!! - well deserved, a good choice of p.o.t.d. ! - Spring is a lovely time !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 2:36 PM
i relish the scene of flowers set against the backdrop of spring, Frederick... a wonderful and delightful thought this is...huggs
Onclaud Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 10:00 PM
a POD indeed!
Gorelick Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 9:56 PM
Beautiful..I love the first line especially. Well done and I expect it will do well...BG
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