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Spring and Nature

slurping the nectar
of blooms so beautiful the...
hummingbirds nourish

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Poet Destroyer A

July 29, 2014 at 5:58 PM

Carol, enjoying a few of your poems today...Linda

Harry Horsman

March 27, 2012 at 9:53 AM

love your haihu Carol. harry

Harry Horsman

March 27, 2012 at 9:53 AM

that's haiku not haihu

Chuck Novotny

March 5, 2012 at 12:13 AM

On first read I thought your words slightly mis-placed, and then a crack in my own view opened and the delightful picture unfolded. Beautiful. - Chuck

Jim Pemberton

March 1, 2012 at 3:29 AM

inspirational words for springtime... Thanks for sharing!

Maureen Lefanue

February 28, 2012 at 12:33 AM

Thanks for letting me know, Carol. Love,Maureen

Andrea Dietrich

February 27, 2012 at 9:33 PM

this is very pretty. Just love those hummingbirds!

Jack Horne

February 27, 2012 at 12:11 PM

What a lovely haiku, Carol. Thanks for all your sweet words x

Bl Devnath

February 27, 2012 at 11:22 AM

Excellent haiku on Spring and Nature, very deep rhythm it carries. Loved always, bl

Gail Debole

February 25, 2012 at 5:15 PM

Your poem reminded me of the beautiful hummingbirds I used to see as a child. Very nice. Thank you for your comment about my poem.

Don Johnson

February 25, 2012 at 2:43 PM

see the blurr in the forest gloom, is him name Hector... well done S Carol Brown...

Matthew Anish

February 25, 2012 at 9:47 AM

Beautiful spring will come again - and you used fine imagery to illustrate that. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Kash Poet

February 24, 2012 at 11:59 PM

Wonderful imagery here Carol.Love it.

Don Munro

February 24, 2012 at 3:41 PM

What heavenly imagery! I can just see them hovering in the air. Stopping by to say hi and thanks for visiting me. I saw some crocuses last week, yeah!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 24, 2012 at 9:42 AM

beautiful visual Haiku Carol and Spring is truly in the air.. u have enhanced it by these lovely words luv..

Shirley Long

February 23, 2012 at 2:19 PM

Well written poem about spring and nature carol. I enjoyed reading it.

James Fraser

February 23, 2012 at 2:18 PM

These birds of little, so large in natures world. Delightful they be, everlastingly. Haiku of small, but it's writings are tall :)

Russell Sivey

February 23, 2012 at 12:49 PM

Glorious write here my friend! I love your poem that your have written this afternoon! I really enjoyed this beautiful nature scene as hummingbirds are wonderful parts of the scene! Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

February 23, 2012 at 12:17 PM

Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Have not seen a hummer yet but I saw butterflies on Tuesday..It is 80 degrees here today..It is suppose to be back freeze Sat and Sun night..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara