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Spring and Nature

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Spring and Nature

slurping the nectar
of blooms so beautiful the...
hummingbirds nourish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 7/29/2014 5:58:00 PM
Carol, enjoying a few of your poems today...Linda
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Date: 3/27/2012 9:53:00 AM
love your haihu Carol. harry
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harry horsman
Date: 3/27/2012 9:53:00 AM
that's haiku not haihu
Date: 3/5/2012 12:13:00 AM
On first read I thought your words slightly mis-placed, and then a crack in my own view opened and the delightful picture unfolded. Beautiful. - Chuck
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Date: 3/1/2012 3:29:00 AM
inspirational words for springtime... Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 2/28/2012 12:33:00 AM
Thanks for letting me know, Carol. Love,Maureen
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Date: 2/27/2012 9:33:00 PM
this is very pretty. Just love those hummingbirds!
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Date: 2/27/2012 12:11:00 PM
What a lovely haiku, Carol. Thanks for all your sweet words x
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Date: 2/27/2012 11:22:00 AM
Excellent haiku on Spring and Nature, very deep rhythm it carries. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:15:00 PM
Your poem reminded me of the beautiful hummingbirds I used to see as a child. Very nice. Thank you for your comment about my poem.
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Date: 2/25/2012 2:43:00 PM
see the blurr in the forest gloom, is him name Hector... well done S Carol Brown...
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Date: 2/25/2012 9:47:00 AM
Beautiful spring will come again - and you used fine imagery to illustrate that. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/24/2012 11:59:00 PM
Wonderful imagery here Carol.Love it.
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Date: 2/24/2012 3:41:00 PM
What heavenly imagery! I can just see them hovering in the air. Stopping by to say hi and thanks for visiting me. I saw some crocuses last week, yeah!
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Date: 2/24/2012 9:42:00 AM
beautiful visual Haiku Carol and Spring is truly in the air.. u have enhanced it by these lovely words luv..
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Date: 2/23/2012 2:19:00 PM
Well written poem about spring and nature carol. I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/23/2012 2:18:00 PM
These birds of little, so large in natures world. Delightful they be, everlastingly. Haiku of small, but it's writings are tall :)
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Date: 2/23/2012 12:49:00 PM
Glorious write here my friend! I love your poem that your have written this afternoon! I really enjoyed this beautiful nature scene as hummingbirds are wonderful parts of the scene! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/23/2012 12:26:00 PM
A lovely sight I enjoyed your haiku Carol love vie
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Date: 2/23/2012 12:17:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Have not seen a hummer yet but I saw butterflies on Tuesday..It is 80 degrees here today..It is suppose to be back freeze Sat and Sun night..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 2/23/2012 11:43:00 AM
A sweet Haiku Carol , thanks for sharing , Hugs and best wishes Declan xxx
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Date: 2/23/2012 11:35:00 AM
Beautiful write
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