Spring - a Tribute To Lynn

It's trying to Spring today
In Dublin's Phoenix Park
The trees are rising from the ashes of Winter
Dressing in a tentative coat of green
Like a thin leafy thong.

Against a bright mixed sky
Two butterflies, or possibly moths,
-The suns' light making identification impossible-
Play tag for supremacy of the skies
Silhouetted in my squinting vision.

A chubby chap with equally chubby dog
Sits on a white bench walking his mate
Spattered by sunlight leaking thru leaves
Of the trees shading his seat
While doggy rustles about happily.

We converse a minute about far off places
And sunburn and the Irish skin
His standpoint underpinned by an anecdote
Remembered from a long time past
A slimmer time for man and beast perhaps.

My wanderings continue in a long lazy lap
Feeling the warmth on my nape
Deer wandering close to the dangerous humans
A childs' laughter carries to my ears
Excitement at the proximity to Rudolphs' pals.

Memories of happier times invade my thoughts
The ninety minutes eaten up with ease
Spring-like humour filtering down to drivers
Who stop, smiling, and invite my crossing
With a ballroom dancers exaggerated hand.

Returning to the island of my car
Feeling distant now from all I've encountered
Warmed from both effort and experience
I smile inwardly and selecting first
Drift out into the Easter Sunday traffic.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 5:14 PM
What a lovely rhyme Brendan - I love Ireland especially Dublin which is such a vibrant city- probably won't visit again this year with the pound dropping against the euro:-(hugs Jan xx
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July 6, 2015 at 6:55 PM
A wonderful refreshing write, Brendan. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I enjoyed my visit here on your page. ~Caryl
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July 7, 2015 at 12:36 AM
Thank you Caryl, and thanks for visiting my page. I look forward to reading more of your work, and writing more of mine! :-)
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May 10, 2015 at 10:24 AM
Brendan :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love
Osborne Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 10:34 AM
Cheers SKAT! I'm pretty shocked that it is featuring, but I can't say that I'm not happy! :-) Thanks for noticing! Love B.
Ward Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 7:25 AM
Interesting work! Julia, with my best wishes.
Osborne Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 10:34 AM
Thanks Julia! :-)
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May 8, 2015 at 2:03 PM
Brendan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Osborne Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 4:27 AM
Linda, Thanks so much for the wonderfully warm welcome to Poetry soup! I am a complete novice at poetry but have always enjoyed playing with words. Promise to read some of your work when time permits! Take care friend! Brendan
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May 8, 2015 at 9:19 AM
great lines, wonderful expressions. What better way for this message to flow?
Osborne Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 9:57 AM
Hey Funom, thank you for your kind words. I'm new to this site (and to poetry) so it is really nice to get your feedback. I clicked on your profile and I can see that you have been very busy with the poetry!! I promise I will get to read some of your work soon! Take care friend! :-)
A  Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 2:17 PM
Amazing tribute, Brendan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 7, 2015 at 2:26 PM
Hi Skat, Thank you so much for the warm welcome. I clicked on your profile picture and was a little intimidated by your long list of wonderful poems - promise to get enjoying them where possible!! I've always loved words but I'm a complete novice at poetry so hoping to continue and improve. Delighted to have you as a poetry soup "FRIEND" *hugs back* Brendan :-)
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