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S - P - R - I - N - G Ah! Harsh cold winter must be tired, his grip weakening, he breathes his last. The frowning skies finally crumble fast revealing downy blue clouds that waltz The sun blows kisses of shine--- like a rainfall touching, caressing but melting adagio the white icy coats among branches... The blossoms sultry strip to loosen their curves then upon naked arms of trees curls the color green trembling with symptoms of spring. Birds twiddle free to sound like thrums. Evergreen trees duet as they whistle to calm tunes of nippy breeze. All around a choir blushing fountain hues of brown, red, pink and yellow. Animals long-hiding from hugs of frost now stands. They burst with grins and jolts-- like squirrels bouncing up and down. Butterflies outstretch wings flutter by! Snow that clogs and plugs finally weeps-- running dry with the heat rising slow on air. It stirs sweet liquid pearls to tip-toe on leaves and petal's swells. Buzzing bees chase fresh floating nectar... Lured, they dance on merry-go-round in the warm bosom of smiling sunshine. Coats and boots all pack and rolled away, chuckles and giggles tickle the daytime flair as little children prance to do some plays. _____________________________________________ POEM OF THE DAY -- JANUARY 07, 2015 Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Contest Name: Seasons Placed 1st ©O.E. Guillermo 06:49 pm, January 01, 2015

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Date: 1/15/2015 11:43:00 PM
another nice reply..thank you
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Date: 1/12/2015 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Olive... Verlena
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Date: 1/13/2015 3:45:00 AM
thank you.. :)
Date: 1/11/2015 9:20:00 PM
Olive,, congratulations on your Awesome Season win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/12/2015 1:49:00 AM
Lolly Linda thanks much,,, ;)
Date: 1/11/2015 5:01:00 PM
hey, i see it says poem of the day ? WAY to GO and congrats to you. this is a beauty.
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Date: 1/12/2015 1:49:00 AM
thanks much Andie.. :)! GBU
Date: 1/9/2015 9:30:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and so much joy written in these lines, Olive! I don't know how I missed this before. I'm glad I found it today. Have a blessed day...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/10/2015 2:43:00 AM
Thanks much RHonda.. :)! I am pleased each time I receive a comment from you.. :) I love your poems and I am as well inspired by them.. :)! hugs back.. :)! GOd bless you..!
Date: 1/8/2015 3:40:00 AM
I really had a good time in reading this! Awesome!
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Date: 1/9/2015 12:59:00 AM
thanks much LEi.. :)!
Date: 1/7/2015 5:22:00 AM
Many congratulations Olive on your win and POTD as well, WOW ;) most deservedly of it's honour - James :) X
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Date: 1/9/2015 12:59:00 AM
thanks much JAmes.. :)! GBU
Date: 1/6/2015 10:21:00 PM
Olive, congratulations on your poem being chosen Poem of the Day! I was so happy for you when you won 1st Place and happy again that your poem was chosen for POTD! Sandra
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Date: 1/9/2015 12:58:00 AM
thanks much Sandra.. :)! GBU
Date: 1/6/2015 8:12:00 PM
Beautiful painting, Olive, congratulations on poem of the day 7
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Date: 1/9/2015 12:57:00 AM
thanks much EVe.. :)! GBU
Date: 1/6/2015 7:33:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Olive! Very well done!! :-) john.
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Date: 1/9/2015 12:54:00 AM
thanks JOhn.. :) Appreciate it.. :)!
Date: 1/6/2015 3:49:00 PM
Olive . . . Congratulations and Best Wishes to you on having your poem selected for Poem of the Day!! Very Well-Done!! Best Always (and Happy New Year), Gary
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Date: 1/9/2015 12:52:00 AM
thanks GAry.. :) GBU
Date: 1/6/2015 3:07:00 PM
yayyy, atta girl, eloi.. galling ng pinay!.. cheers to the POTD feature..huggs
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Date: 1/9/2015 12:51:00 AM
thanks much.. :)! God bless us all.. :D!
Date: 1/6/2015 2:22:00 PM
I really enjoyed this read, congrats on poem of the day
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Date: 1/9/2015 12:40:00 AM
thanks much Timothy.. :)!
Date: 1/6/2015 11:26:00 AM
Dropping back again - poem of the day congrats:-) :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2015 12:39:00 AM
thanks much JAn.. :) hugs too. :D
Date: 1/6/2015 10:31:00 AM
Congratulation! This is perfect.
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Date: 1/8/2015 5:25:00 AM
thanks much Richard.. :)! GBU
Date: 1/6/2015 8:33:00 AM
The poem and poet are both wonderful, delightful, and breath of warm fresh spring air! Well done dear friend.
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Date: 1/8/2015 5:23:00 AM
thanks much David... :)! i love your avatar.. :)! it's agood theme for poetry. :)!
Date: 1/6/2015 8:03:00 AM
Congrats on the Poem of the day Olive; I have no doubt in me that poetry will take you to the top; I am seeing you flying and waxing stronger in the sky,kudos for a Job well done...huggs
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Date: 1/8/2015 5:13:00 AM
thanks much KAyod.. :) Spring must have inspired me that much as I love this season much.. :)!
Date: 1/6/2015 7:59:00 AM
Congrats Olive on being featured today....hugs
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Date: 1/8/2015 5:12:00 AM
thanks much tim .. hugs too. :) tc
Date: 1/6/2015 7:57:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive, you have me excitingly dancing on your words. Grats on poem of the day!!
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Date: 1/8/2015 5:11:00 AM
WOw Cassie you must have asked me s I could have dance with you.. :)! thanks much.. ;)
Date: 1/6/2015 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your write being chosen poem of the day.
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Date: 1/8/2015 5:10:00 AM
thank much MAurice.. :)!
Date: 1/5/2015 11:15:00 PM
Ah thats so lovely dear Olive! congrats on top place win!
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Date: 1/7/2015 1:32:00 AM
thanks much Dr. UPma.. :)God bless us all.. :)!
Date: 1/5/2015 7:36:00 PM
Such a lovely presentation of rising SPRING Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/6/2015 6:49:00 AM
Thanks much Debbie.. :) Yours too is a beauty.. :)! congratulations as well. :D!
Date: 1/5/2015 5:17:00 PM
Congrats on the win Olive
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Date: 1/6/2015 6:48:00 AM
thanks much. :)
Date: 1/5/2015 3:54:00 PM
I knew I would be back with big congratulations Olive_eloi!:) Well done! Fireworks in the sky as we enjoy a nice cake and coffee! Weeeee!! hugs // paul
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Date: 1/6/2015 6:48:00 AM
weeee cake and coffeeeeeeee eh :D :P I like it.. :) hugs and hugs Paul.. :)!
Date: 1/5/2015 1:19:00 PM
(((( applause )))) to you Olive for this wonderful poem being given it's due recognition. Way to go girl. Keep writing, weeee :) James :)
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Date: 1/6/2015 6:38:00 AM
thank you for the applause James.. I hear it here loud and clear.. :D :P
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