Mohan Chutani Poet Tanka

Spring

Sleeping flower buds 
on branches at once wake up
with color and joy 
kissed by the warmth of sunshine
Time to open up windows


Form: Tanka (5 lines: syllable count: 5,7,5,7,7)
Date write: 18.6.2014

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David Mohn June 29, 2014 at 7:49 PM Love the new spring feel of this Mohan...congrats Mohan Chutani June 29, 2014 at 9:08 PM David, Thanks for the wishes. Mohan

Nette Onclaud June 29, 2014 at 3:55 PM special portrait of spring welll woven, mohan.. sweet congrats and huggs! Mohan Chutani June 29, 2014 at 9:09 PM Nette, thanks for your lovely comments and encouragement. Mohan

Donna Jones June 29, 2014 at 1:07 PM Lovely!!!! Always look forward to spring..:-) congratulations on your win Mohan Chutani June 29, 2014 at 9:13 PM Donna, thanks for visit and comments. yes, Spring heralds the warmer days ahead and everyone likes to come out of hibernation of winter. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos June 29, 2014 at 11:19 AM Hi Mohan, my friend, this is such a beautifully descriptive write! Huge congratulations to you on your great win! Warmest regards. Mohan Chutani June 29, 2014 at 11:45 AM Pandita, thanks for your ever warm complements. Mohan

Arlene Smith June 29, 2014 at 9:09 AM This is my favorite, Mohan.. Congrats on a great win, my friend.. hugs.. Arlene Mohan Chutani June 29, 2014 at 10:18 AM Arlene, thanks for liking it and your sweet complements. Mohan

Elaine George June 29, 2014 at 6:11 AM Lovely picture painted in this Spring tanka, Mohan. Many congrats on your win. Elaine Mohan Chutani June 29, 2014 at 6:28 AM Thanks Elaine for your complements. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich June 28, 2014 at 10:53 PM Mohan. I did not get so many spring poems but yours was one of the very best in the category of spring. The word that comes to my mind is delightful! The last two lines were especially endearing. Congrats in my contest. Mohan Chutani June 29, 2014 at 6:30 AM Thanks Andrea for liking my poem and placing it high. Mohan