Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Sijo

Spring

The world of vegetation detects spring much sooner than men 
Buds and herbs rise up from their snowy arrest and wintry rest 
Boost lovers and lambs to spring and brandish in lustful deeds. 

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June 17, 2014
Tenth Place win
Form Sijo: (Syllable counts- 44)

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Teddy Kimathi July 3, 2014 at 5:52 AM Hi Dr. Ram Mehta. A wonderful sijo you have written. I'm practising how to write them at the moment. Applause to you!!! :-)

Donna Jones July 2, 2014 at 8:36 AM Very imaginative.... congratulations on your win..

Nette Onclaud June 29, 2014 at 4:34 PM uniquely done for spring's arrival dr. ram.. cheers to you on your fine win.. hugggs

Pandita Sietesantos June 29, 2014 at 11:41 AM Hi Dr. Ram, this is such a beautifully descriptive write about spring and rebirth! Huge congratulations to you on your well-deserved win! Warmest regards.

Arlene Smith June 29, 2014 at 10:30 AM love the thoughts here, Dr. Mehta. We are the last to sense nature, like animals sensing storms.. Congrats on a fine win.. Hugs.. Arlene

Elaine George June 29, 2014 at 6:44 AM Lovely Sijo, Dr. Ram Many congrats on your win. Elaine

Andrea Dietrich June 28, 2014 at 11:27 PM Congrats on my winners list. The first line so true! and the last line was quite interesting!!

Ugwu Cornelius Chidera June 18, 2014 at 5:12 PM a nice poem! i just like hearing the word "spring"

Connie Marcum Wong June 18, 2014 at 4:27 PM A very lovely Sijo Dr. Ram. I don't think I have tried this form yet. It looks more challenging than one may think!

Shirley Gribble June 18, 2014 at 4:17 AM I was struggling with this form of poetry last night, and not getting far. Having read your poem I may give up! Like it very much. Good wishes, Shirley x

A.E. Rivenbark June 18, 2014 at 3:38 AM I love "snowy arrest". This is a beautiful write Doctor!