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Graphitic clouds approach A grey sky enunciates sudden rain Spring arrived at last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/26/2010 10:52:00 AM
LOve it, Gert, and hey, are you in Germany or Poland then? Luv, andrea
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Date: 3/24/2010 10:32:00 AM
Great wording in this one..I like the enunciates sudden rain....Thanks for the comments on my poem "Away"...It was a description of sorts of a painting...I told what and by whom in my comment on it ....I added some imagination to it also..I tried three times before I posted that one...I still was not totally happy with it...But when I reread it I find parts that I really like...Keep the creative pen flowing..Denki ..Sara
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