Written 7 August 2026 for Pleiades Please Poetry Contest of Bob Carmack
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Sweet spring succeeds severe snow time, Sublime season of plants rebirth, Sunshine mild and warm greets the land, Seeds and flowers sprout from the ground, Sweet-scented scents pervade the air, Stars and silver moon vie to please, Smiles settle on every faces.
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