Spring!

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Spring!

Chaotic child ~tender youth
Mischievous minx ~ naughty tease
Capricious tot ~ steadfast love
Rowdy moppet ~ serene babe
Teases sunlight into rains
Daffodils don't seem to mind
As they twinkle with raindrops

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Ghairo Daniels

April 23, 2026 at 1:43 PM

Yes ! Exactly like Spring ~ just love it. Whenever I read a poem about daffodils, I think about William Wordsworth poem : The Daffodils...I wandered lonely as a cloud that floats on high...I still know poem since high school ...a long long time ago. X.

Valsa George

April 21, 2026 at 9:58 PM

Unique thoughts come crowding into your mind as you think of the varying facets of spring. Your thoughts are beautifully and ingeniously expressed. Rowdy moppet- serene babe... What interesting contrast. Love the image of Daffodils with raindrops on them with raindrops twinkling as diadem.

Susan Ashley

April 21, 2026 at 8:19 AM

My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, you captured the capricious nature of Spring so beautifully with contrasting imagery "Rowdy moppet ~ serene babe" and lovely personification "Daffodils don't seem to mind/As they twinkle with raindrops" - so true and so creatively expressed. Your lovely verse is full of admiration and appreciation for Spring! I hope all is well with you my wonderful poetry sis! Happy Spring! Warmest wishes sent on sunlit rainbows.. ~Susan

Brenda Chiri

April 20, 2026 at 10:42 PM

Lovely write my friend and so happy to see and read your work again!:)

Silent One

April 19, 2026 at 11:41 AM

You did so well with only seven lines.. great use of vocabulary here, which you always do well with my friend... I like the use of daffodils who love the raindrops... after all rain is mercy from the heavens... I hope all is well with you my friend.. keep penning your great poems..

Ink Empress

April 18, 2026 at 5:51 AM

“ Daffodils don't seem to mind As they twinkle with raindrops” ah that made my soul sigh and smile! How beautiful is that dear samszy?! Your way with words is always stunning! I absolutely love yojr wordplay too! You always impress! It seems the weather is gorgeous where you are at! I see through your words. Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always!

sara Etgen-Baker

April 17, 2026 at 5:22 PM

loved the whimsical tone and your imagery...best wishes with your contest entry...wishing you well, Sara

Karen Jones

April 16, 2026 at 5:02 PM

Fun! Love that last line!

Karen Jones

April 17, 2026 at 3:02 PM

What a fun perspective! Have a fabulous weekend Sam!

Sam Kauffman

April 17, 2026 at 2:03 PM

Thank you so much, Karen! Sometimes I think spring is a changeable child not knowing whether to be warm and sunny or cold with rain! Sending you blessings of joy!