Notes About The Poem

Spring

Spring
                                             arrived
                                          Robin  lands.
                                       singing! "Tut-Tut"
                                      Wake up! Daffodils
                                       Tulips, come up!
                                        Where are you?
                                             appear
                                             Bloom

                                             Sun 
                                        Warm rain
                                     Brings forth life.
                                  Pansy's bright smile
                                     Vernal  Equinox
                                 Budding trees, leaves
                                       Nesting birds
                                         Hatchlings
                                             Chirp

                                             Grass
                                            ripples
                                       In the breeze
                                     Lilacs woo bees.
                                      Vivid  lavender
                                     butterflies  flock
                                        Mesmerized
                                          fragrance
                                            Spring




                                 

                                          Written on 2/17/22
                           Written For Springtime "Ninette Contest" 
                                        Sponsored by M.L.Kiser
                                               ~~3rd~~

                                             Poetry Soup
                                         Poem of the Day
                                        ~~ 2/19/ 2022 ~~

                                      Brian Strand Formed
                                      Poetry Contest 3/16/22
                                             ~~ 1st ~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Foster Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 9:33 AM
Love this. Very well written. I also enjoyed the picture. Ann
Brown Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 12:07 PM
Thank you, Ann, for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra
Calasibetta Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 12:11 PM
Such a lovely poem for a dreamy Spring! You have painted a lovely picture of a much awaited season. :)Paulette
Brown Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 6:17 PM
Thank you, Paulette, for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra
Alex Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 2:03 AM
Beautiful painting of the scene in words. Congratulations!
Brown Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Christuraj, for your kind words and your comment. Blessings ~ Debra
George Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 1:40 AM
Hi Debra.....Congratulations once again on your win in Brian's Form Poetry contest!
Brown Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Valsa, for your kind words and your comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Buehler Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 10:54 AM
Debra, I'm back with congratulations on being at the top of the best poems list, with this springtime delight. Blessings, Evelyn
Brown Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 2:48 PM
Thank you, Evelyn, for your kind words and your comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Back to say congrats Debra on being top of the best poems list. Tom
Brown Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 8:35 AM
Thank you, Tom, you're to kind to comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 6:30 AM
Beautiful portraying of the onset of Spring - using an unique form. Congratulations on POTD, and being on top of the popular list. BW ~ Mala
Brown Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 7:37 AM
Thank you Malabika, I wasn't aware "Spring" was number 1 on the list. God can humble you right quick or He can bless you, as I feel now. I'm honored to be among outstanding talent as yourself and everyone out there on PS. Thank you and God Bless ~ Debra
Kulkarni Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 9:27 AM
A cheerful picture of the vivid colors of spring!! Loved it!
Brown Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 6:56 PM
Thank you Smita, I happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 4:49 PM
Lots of lovely imagery, Debra. Congrats on your win
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 8:13 PM
Thank you Andrea for your kind words and your comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Rose  Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 3:06 PM
Your colors are spectacular here Debra, congrats on your win, a beautiful poem that inspire and respires :)
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 8:14 PM
Thank you Rose for your kind words and comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Sands Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 2:14 PM
So lovely ! Congratulations for your win :)
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 2:18 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Blessings ~ Debra
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 1:54 PM
Delightful thoughts in these descriptive and creative Ninettes for spring. Read like great contenders for the contest. Way to go. Your visit to my page was refreshing. Sara
Brown Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 2:03 PM
Thank you, Sara. You are so sweet to comment. I enjoy reading your poems. Poetry Hugs ~ Debra
Watt Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 11:50 PM
Love to read of the sights, scents, and sounds of spring. A delightful ninette series, Debra. Congratulations for your POTD!
Brown Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 2:00 PM
Thanks John, For your kind words and comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations Debra, this is an absolute gem and so aptly chosen to be POTD, hope you enjoyed the honor. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Brown Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 1:45 PM
Thank you, Jennifer, I'm so happy you enjoyed the poem. Happy your here to enjoy the win with me. Hugs ~ Debra
Legros Kelley Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 10:48 PM
Wonderful! I already commented on how much I love your poem, and now I see it made POTD! Hope you are having a super blessed day celebrating this honor on your happy, uplifting poem! <3 ~BJ
Brown Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 1:43 PM
BJ, you are too kind to comment. God has smiled on me today. Enjoy the rest of your day. Blessing ~ Debra
Buehler Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 9:45 PM
Breathtakingly lovely! This beautiful gem is in my faves. Best wishes, Evelyn
Brown Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 1:41 PM
Evelyn, you are too kind with your words . Thank you for favoring the poem. Blessings, my friend. Debra
Nicole Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 8:26 PM
"Sun, warm rain... vivid lavender" Oh, my ! This is a perfect start to spring. There's something magical and mesmerizing about the rain, the aroma of lilacs. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Congratulations Debra, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 8:42 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read the poem, Brandy. When I think of spring, the aroma of lilac is etched in my memory. I can't wait to smell them again. Hugs ~ Debra
George Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 8:03 PM
Beautifully done....Debra... once again let me repeat ! Congratulations on your well deserved POTD. Enjoy your honor !
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 8:20 PM
I'm humbled by your comment. I'm always happy to talk to you, Valsa. Thank you for taking the time to read the poem. Hugs ~ Debra  
Wolf Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 6:07 PM
Love the way you maximized the imagery in the ninette form, leading to emotions swelling in this reader's heart. What a sweet POTD! Congratulations, Debra! Spring Soon! :) gw
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 7:15 PM
Gershon, Thank you. I'm very humbled by your comment. It's always a pleasure to talk to you. Blessings ~ Debra
Kitchin Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 4:44 PM
Beautiful Spring imagery, congratulations on POTD Debra!
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 7:06 PM
Tania, Thank you, for your kind words and for taking the time to read and comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 4:43 PM
Your lovely ninette provides a vivid delightful painting of spring Debra. Congratulations on having this beauty honored for POTD! Blessings xxoo
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 7:05 PM
Connnie, I enjoyed your sweet comment. Thank you for taking the time to read the poem. Hugs ~ Debra
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 4:33 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Lovely Spring poem! BW ~ Mala
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 7:01 PM
Malabika, Thank you, for your kind words and for taking the time to read and comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Goff Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Lovely Debra! those look like wild violets! I snack on them along the trails on my forest hikes, yum! and thank you for your kind comments!
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 2:02 PM
James, Thank you, for your kind words and for taking the time to read and comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Mcintosh Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 12:37 PM
Beautifully done. Congrats on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 1:30 PM
Gina, Thank you, for your kind words and for taking the time to read and comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Goldsmith Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 11:07 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A "Beautiful" spring write. Love This One. Have a blessed day/weekend...............
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 1:31 PM
Paula, Thank you, for your kind words and for taking the time to read and comment. Blessings ~ Debra
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