Spring

Spring

Unpredictable
Days of bursting blooms
Rollicking sunshine
Merriment on springs
Glee springs out of ice

Effervescent
Giggling downpours
Laughs at puddles
Shedding winter

Twist and shout
Rock and roll
Raucous child

Ready...
Get set...

SPRING!!!

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Paula Goldsmith

April 5, 2021 at 8:39 AM

Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "Ready...Get set..." I am ready, I am set, come on spring. Have a blessed day/week...................

Sam Kauffman

April 5, 2021 at 11:05 AM

Thank you so much my friend! Isn't it fun to see how the spirit leaps into the energizing joy of spring! Hope you had a wonderful Easter filled with an abundance of blessings!

JC Brul

April 4, 2021 at 12:18 AM

So beautiful! I like the “Ready get set..” idea...very invigorating! Congratulations Sam! A FAVe for me.

Sam Kauffman

April 5, 2021 at 11:03 AM

Thank you so much JCB! I was hoping to capture that anticipation of spring and wanted to add something fun that would epitomize the joy of the season. Hope you had a wonderful holiday! Sending you blessings of joy!

Jennifer Proxenos

March 26, 2021 at 12:36 PM

At the moment we have, Ready, Get set.... Autumn - but this is Africa so the days are still very pleasant and mellow, the nights at present don't go below 12 degrees centigrade. I like this write very much Sam. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sam Kauffman

April 5, 2021 at 10:59 AM

Hi Jennifer! Many thanks from a grateful heart. So happy you liked this offering! Ready! Get set! Enjoy your "autumn" in all of its glory. Hugs and blessings to you my friend!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 24, 2021 at 9:39 AM

This verse is wild, amazing, exuberant and fun, like spring itself, Sam. So enjoyable! :D

Sam Kauffman

April 5, 2021 at 10:56 AM

Hi Evelyn! Can you tell how far behind I am in responding to messages? Thank you so much for your lovely message. I so look forward to your energizing responses! For me, spring is unrestrained fun let out of a bottle. Hope you had a wonderful Easter. Sending you blessings of joyl.

Juliet Ligon

March 23, 2021 at 2:31 PM

I love your energy and sense of joy even in the rain.

Sam Kauffman

April 5, 2021 at 10:52 AM

Thank you so much Juliet! Spring, for me, is energy unleashed. I so wanted to capture that feeling of throwing off the restraints of winter. Hope you are well! All the best of spring to you!

Jennifer Fenn

March 23, 2021 at 12:57 PM

What a fun poem Sam!

Sam Kauffman

March 23, 2021 at 1:25 PM

Hi Jennifer! Thank you! Spring, for me, is really a raucous playmate! Hope you are having a wonderful spring!

Michelle Faulkner

March 22, 2021 at 9:14 PM

So merry and gleeful, especially 'rollicking sunshine' and 'giggling downpours' - I'm betting on a win for this one :)

Sam Kauffman

March 23, 2021 at 1:23 PM

I had a ball writing this one. As I looked out my office window with the wind hurtling through the trees, flowers and grass all I could see was a happy wanderer gleefully returning! Thank you my friend for your happy words - made me feel happy. Hope you are enjoying the coming of spring in the north woods! All the best.

L Milton Hankins

March 22, 2021 at 6:18 PM

Such a delightful piece of work, Sam. I loved it! I loved the perfect words leading to "SPRING!!!"

Sam Kauffman

March 23, 2021 at 1:18 PM

Hi LM! Your visit and delightful words put a spring in my step and smile on my face! Thank you! I'm so glad you loved this bounce into the season! I found myself using such active verbs that the last lines wrote themselves first! All the best. Blessings and prayers to you.