Spring

it's the
 first day of
 beautiful spring, 
 so hard to believe it's...
 snowing! 

 5-10-19
 Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 - Cinqku- Contest
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Kulkarni Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 10:15 AM
Great Cinqku! Congratulations on your win! -Smita
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 12:13 AM
Great juxtaposition Joseph
Haight Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Ha Ha, Joseph! Mother nature is so fickle! Very nice Cinqku and congrats on your First Place win. Sandra
Drowley Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 12:37 PM
'Joseph, Congratulations on your win. Keep up the excellent work. David'
Kitchin Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations on your first place win with your excellent cinqku
Sands Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations for your win Joseph :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 12:37 AM
I am so glad to see this in 1st Place Joseph. It is very deserving of the honor. Congratulations my friend. : ) xxoo
Nicole Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 4:30 PM
Congratulations Joseph, on this win. Happy Spring. :) Brandy
La France Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 9:45 AM
Joseph ,congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem. We are a bit chilly in Ottawa Canada too !
May Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 9:48 PM
Thank you for my placement DH..
Cunningham Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 5:57 AM
Back with congrats Joseph on your top win. Tom
Gilmour Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 3:33 AM
Great Cinqku Joseph and congratulations on your well deserved top win! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 3:15 AM
- Congratulations on your top win, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 12:41 AM
That is a great cinqku, not yet used to it for me, not my cuppa, nonetheless, well worthy of 1st place man, Aloha wk
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 6:21 PM
Good on you for first place. Congrats, Joseph.
Warrior Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 4:33 PM
I know...whats up with this weather?... I want my money back lol...great cinqku my friend...in place for a win...^WW^
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 9:32 PM
Winter keeps hanging on by its claws. Love your Cinqku Joseph. : ) xxoo
Sergi Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 9:00 PM
Hi Joseph: Spring is in the air . there is no aftermath when it leaves in Florida! Best wishes in the contest.
Sergi Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 4:57 PM
WHEN YOU LIVE IN FLORIDA...
Nicole Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 3:40 PM
Even though I am not experiencing snow, here in the South. I have heard there are many still feeling Winter's touch. May the warm caress of Spring finally arrive for those in waiting. :) So beautifully written and presented. ~ Brandy
Cunningham Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 1:25 PM
Haha it seems to happen a lot these days Joseph, the seasons are all mixed up. Good luck. Tom
Michael Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 9:59 AM
Correct...Nice one...it is a white Spring...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 8:12 AM
Lol! Not so hard to believe in these parts ;) Enjoyed! xomo
Andresen Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 8:08 AM
- I know exactly how it feels, Joseph :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:11 AM
So good how you captured that contrast, Joseph..it is the way you describe.
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