Spring

buds slowly open often armed with sharp prickles- songs among branches 3/1/2019 Poetry Contest: Spring Haiku Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/30/2019 8:23:00 PM

Hello Eve, yes now that it is Spring everything awakes from a deep sleep. have a nice evening my friend.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/28/2019 1:32:00 PM

A clever Haiku, lovely, Eve. Congratulations!

James Horn

Date: 3/8/2019 4:47:00 PM

To learn what love was had to look, Some weird story up start to cook; Bottle spin; Kiss again; Love fell out when book we shook.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2019 2:39:00 PM

Clever way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats. Sara

James Horn

Date: 3/6/2019 10:49:00 AM

Had deer who would dare, Show his face most anywhere Scared off by big bear

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/4/2019 11:50:00 PM

I love this Eve! Your last line truly gave me that aha moment and made me sigh! Really lovely Eve. Congratulations on your win! xxoo : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2019 2:34:00 PM

Back with congrats, Eve!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/3/2019 12:26:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/3/2019 10:23:00 AM

Congrats on your win Eve

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/3/2019 8:22:00 AM

Gorgeous Haiku Eve, Congratulations on your win! xomo <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/3/2019 7:39:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Eve.

Charles Messina

Date: 3/3/2019 7:38:00 AM

Very nice, Eve. Congratulations on your win.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/3/2019 7:26:00 AM

Hi Eve, Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/3/2019 6:47:00 AM

Lovely work Eve, congratulations...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2019 6:36:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely Spring Haiku, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/3/2019 6:03:00 AM

Back with congratulations Eve. Tom.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/3/2019 5:34:00 AM

A beautifully written haiku, congratulations on your winning placement!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/3/2019 3:14:00 AM

Music to my ears!

Joseph May

Date: 3/2/2019 9:15:00 PM

Wonderful write Eve...Best wishes..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2019 7:33:00 PM

ohhh, love that last line!!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/2/2019 2:49:00 PM

"songs among the branches"; wonderful, had to "fav".

Silent One

Date: 3/2/2019 12:29:00 PM

Lovely imagery Eve..

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/2/2019 5:12:00 AM

This poem, Eve, has a lovely unhurried softness, and is so beautiful with the "sunshine rain".

Eve Roper
Date: 3/2/2019 10:11:00 AM

Thank you. Hugs Eve ~`*

Jean Murray

Date: 3/2/2019 5:12:00 AM

Lovely sunshine rain...bow Eve.

Eve Roper
Date: 3/2/2019 10:11:00 AM

Thank you. Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2019 2:34:00 PM

- Spring is a revelation, dear Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper
Date: 3/2/2019 10:11:00 AM

Thank you. Hugs Eve ~`*