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Today, the long lost sun hides and peeks, poking patches of snow to evaporate. Green tinges from trees faintly shine through bare branches, a halo effect. Yawning yellow daffodils nod, egregiously succeeding navigation of lingering winter weather. Lack of spring's sun contributes to lackadaisical plant growth, fostering fortuitous environmental confusion. Nature awaits spring's steady stream of daylight to energize and incite trees and flowers to bloom. April 28, 2018 Spring Contest by craig cornish April 29, 2018 Free Verse Fifteenth Place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/30/2018 10:49:00 PM

A lovely and uplifting poem, Susan. Congrats.

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/1/2018 12:00:00 AM

Thanks so much Line!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 4/30/2018 2:02:00 AM

Congratulations, Susan on your win. Nice line.. "Green tinges from trees faintly shine through".

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/30/2018 8:21:00 AM

Thanks for kind comment. :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/29/2018 10:07:00 PM

Love your creative alliterative language and lovely imagery of daffodils in your spring poem, Susan! Congrats on your placement :)

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/30/2018 12:24:00 AM

Thank you Laura. Thanks for commenting.

James Inman

Date: 4/29/2018 5:22:00 PM

Image filled write Susan. My mother loves Daffodils, especially Jonquils. (To make a Narcissus grow you have to tickle it under its cup, it likes the attention-a little flower humor.)

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/29/2018 7:23:00 PM

Lol! Thank you James. I fell for that little humor lol.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/29/2018 9:49:00 AM

Great free verse and vocabulary - I love words like "egregiously" and "lackadaisical"!

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/29/2018 12:24:00 PM

I know, right? I've always liked those two. I probably overuse them :) Thank you for reading and commenting. Appreciate it.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 4/29/2018 1:39:00 AM

Ahh so wonderfully written, I could imagine some beautiful pictures of spring, good luck in the contest

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/29/2018 3:29:00 AM

Thanks Faraz for reading and commenting. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2018 6:19:00 PM

This is very well written, Susan. Luck in the contest. Can't remember if this is one that got judged yet or not! (I think not)

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/29/2018 12:45:00 AM

Thanks Andrea. You too.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/28/2018 2:29:00 PM

Lovely alliteration. Refreshing imagery.

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/29/2018 12:45:00 AM

Thank you Juliet. Appreciate your input.

John Gondolf

Date: 4/28/2018 6:38:00 AM

Very nice images of spring. I felt like I had read this before then I realized you borrowed some of the thoughts from Spring Peekaboo. Enjoyed. John

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/28/2018 6:44:00 AM

Yes I did. Thank you for noticing. This one had to be free verse and Im not very experienced with free verse.