Spring-Summer Rain

An afternoon stroll, I could not detain; Together stroll arm-in-arm the distance. Whisk away with the sudden cool light rain. Fruit set, new growth, leaf and shoot existence. Marigold start to bloom, love's insistence. Butterflies swarm; all different colours, Across the garden with all the others. Spring-summer rain, flickering gray shadow, Blow the birds about with their small brothers. I hope it doesn't rain again tomorrow. 4/11/2020 Rain Dizain (10 lines, 10 syllables per line, a b a b b c c d c d Poetry Contest: Delightful Dizains Sponsored by: Beth Evans

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Date: 4/14/2020 2:45:00 PM
Lovely descriptive piece on spring time. Just starting to get nice with small bits of snow left. love phyl
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Date: 4/13/2020 11:15:00 PM
Vividly descriptive and lovely, Eve! Janice
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Date: 4/12/2020 8:52:00 PM
I hope for your sake it doesn't...You wrote of a special time, "Spring-Summer Rain" it's beautiful but not everyday
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Date: 4/12/2020 5:39:00 PM
truly a delightful dizain, dear Eve. Mine is not delightful at all, but I am hoping that was not a rule that it had to be delightful!! I love the topic of your poem here on this wonderful Easter day.
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Date: 4/12/2020 11:26:00 AM
Beautiful sequence of words and descriptions of the marvel of nature. Truly enjoyed this on Easter Morning. Thanks for your contented pen. Happy Easter. Lonna
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Date: 4/12/2020 9:30:00 AM
Love this form, and yes your wonderful poetry does complement it......
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Date: 4/12/2020 4:57:00 AM
You did this really well.. it flows perfectly..
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