thriveni c mysore Poet Free verse

sprightly songbird

“The sound of birds stops the noise in my mind.”
—  quote by Carly Simon
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I see pair of red-whiskered bulbuls
with wrong-end rouge, spikes, eloquent note
gurgling - spinning love, singing the loop,
billing, bowing, chattering. I swoon

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Marilene Evans March 14, 2025 at 3:19 PM I wake up hearing the birds singing in the tree ... hearing these melodious tweets are music to my ears. Congratulations! thriveni c mysore March 14, 2025 at 6:33 PM Have you heard Koel dear poet? It tugs your heartstrings. Thank you for your kind visit and words dear poet, means so much to me. thank you.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa March 12, 2025 at 9:00 PM Its musicality gives life to the poem. It's like I am hearing the songs of that bird in my ears. Well done and congrats on your win. thriveni c mysore March 12, 2025 at 9:07 PM Thank you for your kind visit dear friend. Yeah they have naughty songs too, keeps repeating till the other responds. It is bliss to hear them, they nest in my backyard garden. thank you for your pleasant words dear poet.

Paula Goldsmith March 12, 2025 at 9:52 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful bird write. Congratulations on your win. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away............ thriveni c mysore March 12, 2025 at 8:20 PM thank you for your kind visit and sweet words dear poet, thank you for the blessings.

Karen Jones March 12, 2025 at 12:13 AM Congratulations on your lovely poem’s win dear poet! thriveni c mysore March 12, 2025 at 8:20 PM thank you dear poet for sweet words, thank you.

Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 6:26 PM For me, sound of birds are therapeutic my dear poet friend threvini. Thank you for introducing this beautiful and talented bird through your creative words. They are truly amazing. I enjoyed your poem. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always. Hugs thriveni c mysore March 9, 2025 at 6:26 AM It is bliss to hear them as you say dear friend. Birds are Lords embellishments. Thank you for your kind visit. I am glad you liked the write, I am grateful to you for your blessings and hugs. thank you dear poet. Hugs.