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Spreading the Seed

Soon he'll come with salty sums,
By the gallon--by the ton!
Instinct decrees he spread the seed-
Nothing else could be more fun!

A Rain of white blinds my sight,
Unless, of course, I swallow...
And I'm certain I just might-
Do it all again tomorrow!

Copyright © Just That Archaic Poet | Year Posted 2013

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Robin Davis Date: 12/20/2013 4:34:00 PM Chan The Man You naughty naughty boy. Trying to disguise your badness in between poem lines. You need to be spanked. HHHMM NO you might like that. HEE HEE Thanks for the sweet and kind comment on my Towed My Heart Away Hugs and Love Sweet Pea Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 12/21/2013 8:07:00 AM LOL! I love being dirty without being dirty! ;)

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/19/2013 7:13:00 PM Must I understand or can I run away without understanding anything at all? I'd prefer the second choice but I'm afraid it's too late! I did open Pandora's box, it seems...What will happen to me Clever write! Hahaha! Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/23/2013 7:02:00 AM Thank you, V! ;)

Karen Anglesey Date: 10/13/2013 5:22:00 PM I had no idea such an experience could be so poetically engaging... also, see last line of the first verse. Did you mean "Nothing" instead of Noting? Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/14/2013 8:16:00 AM ARGH! Thanks for catching that, Karen. I'm usually good at proof-reading, but that one slipped right passed me. It's so much fun to be vulgar without being explicit lol ;) <3

Jake Ponce Date: 10/12/2013 11:42:00 PM I. LOVE. THIS!!! Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/13/2013 6:37:00 AM lol Thanks, Jake. It's a bit "naughtier" than the subjects I usually write about, but I found it fun writing this. I like being vulgar in a "read between the lines" kind of way. Really happy you enjoyed; thanks for the review :)