Spraying Mucus

Though I have flu I tried putting up~show,
while on a date,sneezing spoils the smooth flow,
Mucus flies out of my nose,
which gives her a spraying dose;
with that look on her face,"no chance"!,I know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Limerick Fun, Limerick Crazy" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 9:01 PM
Congrats, Olusegun. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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June 11, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Olusegun, a super congrats in my contest... I had lots of giggles reading all my entries,..xox~pd
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 10:24 PM
GOOD one, Olusequn. I remember it and I am glad to see it got a win. CONGRATS
Williams Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 7:26 AM
Olusegun congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Sneezing Limerick" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 7:05 AM
I would say you are right about that! Good one Olusequn. congrats on your HM
Quigley Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 10:01 PM
Do you get any second dates???:) Congratulations Kash
Poet Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 7:15 PM
Congrats Olusegun on your win.Enjoyed your write very much.
Song Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 7:00 PM
Hi Olusegun..I want to comment on your romantic mucus poem...lol. The judges were giggling big time about the last line! I guess the lesson in here is ...get better b4 u try to go on a date and impress that special girl, right? Congrats on a HM in a very competitive contest. The 3 judges had way toooo much fun! All the best to you, Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 8:11 PM
EWWWW, that's gross, but also funny!!! Good luck with the contest, Olusegun!
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December 29, 2011 at 5:27 PM
ohh myy...hopefully she'd understand. Very witty !!!
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