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^{Format of the New form of Rhyme named MINICHU is as follows: Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) 2. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 3. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. 4. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3 Stanza 2: 4,8,2 Stanza 3: 2,4,1}

_{Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting}

Lets Minichu on Spouse

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When the biological clock goes tick tick tick~ she’ll pick her a catch by age thirty-six—I Am Anaya

Spouse Minichu

A husband she searches
all through the land in a faraway valley
and churches

A wife’s match
Want ad~ mustn’t dilly dally
a catch

clocks tick
bio tally
Pick!

A husband she searches
Want ad~ mustn’t dilly dally
Pick!

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2024 6:28:00 PM

My sweetie and I met in Mexico. She was from Vancouver and I was from Toronto. In 3 days I knew she was the one, 31 years later, I’m still madly in love with her. When you know you know.;0)

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/4/2024 9:31:00 PM

Your are both blessed to have each other, Richard! It's really true, love at first sight...:)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2024 10:59:00 AM

If only there were truth in advertising, hopefully she picked well, although these decisions shouldn’t be made to quickly. I found this to be very entertaining.

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/4/2024 11:54:00 AM

Thank you! Meant to be entertaining

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/4/2024 11:53:00 AM

Hi Richard, some smart girls wait, specific reasons to marry, career, etc. but the biological clocks tick. Conventional wisdom says you'll know what you want only after you've seen a lot of what you don't however, all clichés and list of reasons why not can be cancelled out by selecting someone with 'profound' &'significant' things in common! Marriage works when two compromise.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/1/2024 3:46:00 AM

What an amusing poem you wrote, Anaya. I missed your poetry lately. Hugs, my friend.

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/1/2024 7:41:00 AM

Awe, thank you, Victor! I like the form, like a crossword! Hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 3/31/2024 11:14:00 AM

Nice poem on the contest theme.

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/1/2024 7:40:00 AM

Thanks, Jay!

Silent One

Date: 3/31/2024 4:54:00 AM

Great take on the contest.. Best of luck..

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/1/2024 7:40:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One!

Ink Empress

Date: 3/31/2024 12:09:00 AM

Dear anaya, you are really good at this form, youv really done an exceptional poem on spouse, a minichu that left me awe inspired. How beautiful! Your rhymes are always so unique, and clever: i love searches and churches, that opening stanza is brilliant , and love the flow of this! Im sure this should do well in the contest , pleasure reading this. Best wishes. Sending you light always

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/1/2024 7:39:00 AM

Thank you, Empress! I really like this form, like a crossword puzzle. lol. Your visits are a pleasure, blessings~Anaya